Reviews For Black Rock Tale
This is awesome! Why isn't there more!?
Date: Jul 12, 2012 08:56 am [Report This]
Wow, very nice telling of the story. I'm always a fan of the old "really had to go while riding" cliche, but this was absolutely wonderful. And that ending, for the driver to have been there to see it all, there couldn't have been a more humiliating ending than that (except maybe wetting her self in front of her uncle).
Date: Oct 10, 2010 06:12 pm [Report This]
hmm, you're a talented author. I wonder if you're still around.
Date: May 27, 2010 11:58 pm [Report This]
heh, that was awesome! ^_^
more side stories plz ^_^
Date: May 02, 2009 12:18 am [Report This]
this story is diffenatly awesome.
PLEASE say there's more chapters coming!
Author's Response: Of course there. Just gotta work up the effort and more chapters will come up. They might pop up in sets of 2 or 3 though, which will take a little longer.
Date: Apr 27, 2009 07:46 am [Report This]
Not too sure why this doesn't have any reviews yet, but what the hell. I'll go first.
There aren't a whole lot of "clean" (relatively speaking, of course) stories on this site, so when I read this one and it had only the masturbation tag I wasn't really sure what to expect. Fortunately, I do like to read stories with masturbation in them, and this one was pretty good. The pace was fast and the action was steamy, and by steamy I mean H-A-W-T in the classic sense.
A few things struck me as kind of strange, though. I know you said that adding more named characters would sacrifice a "certain feeling". But I think that having another real character for Natalie to interact with made the story ten times more interesting. Also, we don't really know anything about Natalie other than that she's a rich guy's daughter in a big mansion, and her dad is an archeologist of some sort. We don't know anything about the time period or even what country she's in. Developing her circumstances and the setting some more would help the story, I think.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I am happy that you enjoyed it, it means a lot. The 'something' I was thinking of was a bit of surreal-ness that popped up in my mind. Exactly as you said the story often has a feeling of happening nowhere in no time. It has the benefit of me not having to stick to a select period (and dealing with stuff like using the wrong language, accent or names). I didn't realize it was this troublesome to readers though, I'll have to think more about it and see if I can think of a way to remedy the problem.
There aren't a whole lot of "clean" (relatively speaking, of course) stories on this site, so when I read this one and it had only the masturbation tag I wasn't really sure what to expect. Fortunately, I do like to read stories with masturbation in them, and this one was pretty good. The pace was fast and the action was steamy, and by steamy I mean H-A-W-T in the classic sense.
A few things struck me as kind of strange, though. I know you said that adding more named characters would sacrifice a "certain feeling". But I think that having another real character for Natalie to interact with made the story ten times more interesting. Also, we don't really know anything about Natalie other than that she's a rich guy's daughter in a big mansion, and her dad is an archeologist of some sort. We don't know anything about the time period or even what country she's in. Developing her circumstances and the setting some more would help the story, I think.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I am happy that you enjoyed it, it means a lot. The 'something' I was thinking of was a bit of surreal-ness that popped up in my mind. Exactly as you said the story often has a feeling of happening nowhere in no time. It has the benefit of me not having to stick to a select period (and dealing with stuff like using the wrong language, accent or names). I didn't realize it was this troublesome to readers though, I'll have to think more about it and see if I can think of a way to remedy the problem.
Date: Apr 21, 2009 07:57 pm [Report This]
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