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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Adrian69702017 Signed
Good story.  I enjoyed it enormously.  
Date: Jan 04, 2017 03:39 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Captain Victoria Signed

The low scores this received are unfair. It's certainly a lot better-written than a lot of the recent stories, and you implied enough of the defecation while keeping it tame and not writing hardcore scat, so you stuck to your own principles. It was fun, it had some nice realistic dialogue, a really vivid setting, and I found myself really invested in the characters in a strange way - the way they played off of each other and Sam's reactions to her "gal pal" were charming and amusing.

A short, sweet story with some great toilet action and excellent atmosphere. I hope to see more from you in the future.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: Nov 07, 2016 11:33 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: MyndBlown Signed
I'm not expecting you to write explicitly about scat or anything like that, and I wasn't expecting scat from a fart story! I really don't care how you express that she's taking a dump... But if she is, how am I supposed to know that?

Author's Response:

Because she's on the toilet.

 

I figured the onomatopoeias I used made it pretty obvious, but I guess not.

Date: Oct 31, 2016 12:17 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: MyndBlown Signed
It's an alright story. What went wrong is that it looked like a bunch of white bars. I barely could read the stoey at all. Second, I could not understand why a person who has to fart would end up on the toilet... And it would definitely better if you added some poop action (diarrhea in my case). Honestly, I would give this story a rating of 3.5 or 4 stars but the white highlight really kills it.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm not sure what the deal is with the formatting; it seems to do that whenever I copy/paste from st.ash.

 As far as why she's in the toilet, ..well, she's taking a dump. I don't go into detail because I don't write explicit scat. Considering the story is only tagged with "farting" and not "defecation", "scat" etc, so I'm not sure what you were expecting going in.

Date: Oct 30, 2016 11:30 pm [Report This]
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