Really great work!
Author's Response: Thanks! It's good to know the effort pays off.
Nice to see a new work from ya.
Interesting scenario, feels a bit different from your usual works in some ways, but still a fun read. There are some spelling errors here and there, and I would say the use of "doody" is a bit strange, though I guess I'm more used to the words "shit" and "crap" and the like.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I'm not sure what about it is different from my usual works. I gave each of the girls a different word for feces as a way of keeping their "voices" distinct.