Title: Electric Booty Gals on the Loo Reviewer: abigbada2 Signed
Man, you are quckly becoming one of my favorite writers. I honestly like how you write the whole scenes, from the buildup to the payoff it's really nice and well paced, although the second chapter did feel a bit less so them the first. Your focus on the girls while their are doing it is also much appreciatted as there are some times when people focus so much on the guy that is on the scene or the scat that is happening they kinda forget to show how the actual person that is shitting is feeling during it. Overall very good stuff.
Date: Mar 05, 2019 10:42 pm [Report This]


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