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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: AniDisFan Signed

A pretty good story.

I liked Sokka and Toph's dialogue.

The detailed description of Katara's undressing was a nice touch.

I really liked how you described Katara's bowel movements.

Starting of the first part of her evacuation "It flowed smoothly and easily from her colon" made it sound to me like she really needed to go.

I sure would like someone to draw Katara on the pot, preferably without a view of her "moistening pussy".

Date: Sep 07, 2011 06:32 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Philly206 Anonymous
Do you think you can put this on fanfiction or deviantArt.
Date: Feb 06, 2011 02:02 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: HaloAnime Signed
Make a freakin sqeual!
Date: Dec 17, 2010 10:43 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: SharkBait Signed
Actually read this one a while ago (Since it was, you know, UPLOADED a while ago) but thought I'd throw my two cents in: EXCELLENT! Buckets are a total "thing" for me, and this filled the niche. Wouldn't hurt to see more Avatar stories on this site, either.
Date: Oct 31, 2010 12:21 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: nexes Signed
good
Date: Jun 14, 2010 07:00 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bleachbetch Signed
It was great, but i thought a nice twist at the ending would be toph using the mess to cut through the bars, or maybe earthbending it before Katara went so she could hold it.. Iunno. Still, great work!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. That would be an interesting twist, but for whatever reason I can\'t see Toph bending pooh. Ah, well. Thanks for the review!
Date: Jan 02, 2008 11:29 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: EFROdian Signed
Awesome is all I can say.  You know the Avatar characters perfeclty.  I could actually see this as part of an episode (well, a fantasy episode anyway).  Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Complex as some of the characters are in the show, they\'re fairly simple to write as long as you don\'t try to delve into their emotions ^^. If there were an episode like this, it would be enough to move Avatar past Samuari Jack as my favorite cartoon ever.
Date: Oct 16, 2007 03:26 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Very nicely done, I really like how Sokka does the swoop of the arms, that's so like him to dramatize EVERY single thing :P



Author's Response: Yeah, I liked writing Sokka. I think I got his personality down pretty well here.rnrnThanks for the review (again) and I\'m glad you enjoyed it.
Date: Sep 09, 2007 02:26 am [Report This]
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