Reviews For Shizune\'s Strife
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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: bored Signed

This is one the best stories on this site. Excellent build up and use of detail! A+

Date: Feb 24, 2011 11:58 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
I found much of this entertaining. Shizune's plight, her eventual solution, the tension as she tries to do avoid being discovered, and the final revelation that Tsunade is naughty enough to do the same thing on a regular basis. But I was displeased by the parts about masturbation, because I find that gross.
Date: Feb 02, 2010 01:32 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Toasty Signed
Wow, I just remembered reading this story years back and was reminded of how good it was. I don't know if it's because you're female or because your a really good writer (probably both) but the descriptions of desperation, masturbation and peeing in this story feel very realistic. I hope you write something again in the future, it would be a shame if this remained your only story on this site.
Date: Jan 31, 2010 02:06 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed
Great story. Kinda reminds me of that movie with the chick who stays in her bosses seat in a wedding dress and pisses herself. Anyway, I liked how it all played out, not many stories here have the added sexual flair aside from Anime Lover's stuff, but he usually has the fetish elements layered on.
Date: May 20, 2009 01:24 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Anime Lover Signed
Hehe, that was nice ^_^
Date: Sep 07, 2008 05:17 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
Very well done. The desperation, masturbation and peeing were all described throughly and the interruptions and situations you put Shizune in were quite humorous.

Very good first story, hope to see more from you in the future.
Date: Jan 04, 2008 06:20 pm [Report This]
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