WOW its a great story
I LOVE IT
WOW its a great story
I LOVE IT
Not half bad, but it could use a little work.
There should've been a bit more build up to the dump, maybe even a moment with her considering on soiling simply as a means to find a new activity to pass time with. I would say the ending felt a little rushed, but nothing too hasty or thrown together.
Overall, a good effort.