Reviews For Peach's Poo
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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: sonic Signed
totally funny i give it 100 stars
Date: Sep 07, 2009 08:44 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: devimo89 Signed
this story is very good. i enjoyed alot and the last part about mario bring your plunger is genius
Date: May 30, 2008 08:50 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: N Signed
Just like Jimmy Olsen, I have a problem with this. Generally, when I read a story, I want it to be believable. Its sort of a guide for fantasies in my head. But... while making a great attempt at portraying a story focusing around Princess Peach (and a theme that I, frankly, have been wanting to see for a long time), I think that this story doesn't actually showcase Peach behaving as she would normally behave. Her actions aren't as believable as I'd like them to be, and it makes the story not as enjoyable as it could be.

Great effort, though, I do look forward to reading other stories on the same vein.
Date: May 24, 2008 09:43 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: ahorotor Signed

Very nice story!

Date: May 24, 2008 12:20 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
I thought it was really good. Who knew Peach had that side in her :).I'll bet having a prettyt girl poop and pee on herself at meetings would make politics a whole lot more interesting :)

Thanks for sharing.
Date: May 24, 2008 12:15 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
I really hate to have to say this, since you spent so much time working on this, and obviously care very much about the Mario universe, but I really wasn't feeling this one. The description is very good. It made Peach seem real, and got me excited, but I felt like her actions were out of character. I allow for a lot of leeway when it comes to that, and enjoy man fics with that sort of believability issue, but I felt like this one went past that. Don't get me wrong, Peach acting a little naughty could be both believable and fun, but I just can't see her acting THAT naughty.

So yeah, there were some things I enjoyed here, but overall it's not what I want to read in a Peach fic. Still, I would like to read more by you set in this universe. You're a talented writer and the Mushroom Kingdom provides many interesting possibilities.
Date: May 24, 2008 03:53 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Nice!

Poor Mario, will he ever catch a break? First Peach is captured on a weekly basis, now she's clogging the toilet like it was no big deal (well, maybe for her rump, I guess XP).

 

Date: May 23, 2008 10:38 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Anime Lover Signed

Hehe

Short and to the point

Simply awesome ^_^ 

Date: May 23, 2008 04:39 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Teesle Signed

As Frank West would say :

Faaaan-tastic.

I especially chuckled at the last part where she wrote the letter, of which I thought she would have hundred that she would just sign over and over again to lure Mario back into her castle . 

Great work with her emotions and thoughts there, just the "soundwords" in the story didn't fit so well in my opinion .

Date: May 23, 2008 04:19 pm [Report This]
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