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Title: Aisha teaches Melfina about the toilet Reviewer: CruelAngel Signed

Fun to read, though one line kind of irks me:

"Uh, no, that's poop, the pee comes out your vagina,"

 You do know that girls don't pee out of their vagina, right?



Author's Response: Oh for the love of christ it doesn't matter. It still comes from the crotch, just because she didn't say urethra doesn't make it wrong. Don't get so touchy on fucking small details.
Date: Oct 11, 2009 09:41 pm [Report This]
Title: Aisha teaches Melfina about the toilet Reviewer: EFROdian Signed
Ah, yes, I remeber that one from the original stories that were posted on Nyo Fiction.  The first-ever "girl learning how to use the bathroom by watching an experienced girl go to the bathroom" genre.  A very enjoyable story and genre if I do say so myself.  You've also got the characters down pat.  Maybe someone'll do a contest between Melfina and Aisha, that'd be a sight to see!  Keep up the good work!
Date: Oct 29, 2007 03:33 am [Report This]
Title: Aisha teaches Melfina about the toilet Reviewer: Toasty Signed
Ah,  yes. The story that started the "potty training" craze. Still fun to read.
Date: Sep 10, 2007 07:04 pm [Report This]
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