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Title: Bella's binge Reviewer: eggdude Signed

that's awesome on so many levels

First, Bella got a cute innocent charm  who makes her adorable

Then, I like the way she lives with her 20 times bigger digestive system : she ates a lot, digest noisily, fart all day long and shits buckets : that's the complete circle of an orgasmic digestion

To finish, your writing style is cute and sexy, i'm not into scat (only feeding) but you made it gracefull and cute ^_^

I would LOOOVE to read a new story about bella, maybe with a boyfriend who would be slapping her sensitive belly or which she would sit on his face while digesting...so many possibilities
Fart fetish complete feederism fetish so perfectly, You won the internet



Author's Response: Heh, I get the impression this is the most unknown of my stories. Noting bad at all with a girl who can eat! Glad you liked it. I had in mind turning it into a series at one time, but ideas dried up lol
Date: Nov 17, 2011 04:37 pm [Report This]
Title: Bella's binge Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
Not bad. It was different from the standard fare on nyou, that's for sure. What with the focus on inhaling food and the character being a BBW.

It wasn't bad either. I really thought that the pooping scene could have used some more work tho. It ... well it kinda paled in comparasion to most of your other work.

Overall, not bad at all. I enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Yes, focus was on eating rather then pooping. Though subtle described, her dump was a quite substantional multiflush happening :3
Date: Jan 07, 2009 12:29 pm [Report This]
Title: Bella's binge Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed
Definately a nice story. A little light on the plot and all that, but it does the trick. Wouldn't mind seeing something like this again. There is something strangely appealing about a girl getting really full from needing to poop XP

Author's Response: I might do something similar in say.. 2014, based on my current backlog -_-
Date: Jan 02, 2009 12:31 am [Report This]
Title: Bella's binge Reviewer: S.T. the Kitsune Signed
I like it a little bit, I don't usually read stories with a lack of scat but this is win nonetheless.

Author's Response: Lack? There was a pretty large if subtle dump in the end :p
Date: Dec 30, 2008 10:54 am [Report This]
Title: Bella's binge Reviewer: DrBones Signed
Nice simple answer to a request. For the record Yarr, my girls (Videl and Starfire) know how to flush too.

I've actually seen quite a few of these “stuffing/belly enlargement" pics. and fics. on deviantART including the Bella character and I may even know who requested this. I was happy to see this as it addresses the one thing I had always felt was missing from this type of work; what happens after? They may have a few nice farts, but I would like to see the results addressed a little more often, especially when the subject of the girls pig-outs are things like chilly dogs and burritos. It would have been nice to cover her dump in more detailed, but it seems most belly fetishists aren't into pooping that much. Still, I'm glad you put it up here, maybe you could more requests for people outside our little group. I'll remember that if I ever request anything from you (and I really may sometime) to include as much detail as possible!

Author's Response: The more detail I get for requests the better I can work, so when ordering, fill out the form! :p
Date: Dec 26, 2008 08:04 pm [Report This]
Title: Bella's binge Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
Not bad, but not much of a plot. It would be a more memorable story if she ran into someone she knew at the restaurant who isn't aware of her digestive habits, or was playing games with someone when her urge hits. This would allow for some dialog and awkwardness (especially if this person has a thing for her, or vice versa), and make the story more interesting. But I think the main problem is that you don't really describe Bella. Besides her basic build, I can't picture her. That reduces my possible enjoyment of the story considerably.

But now I've probably given you the impression I hated the story. I actually thought it was all right, just much less than it could have been. Who requested this, by the way?

Author's Response: I agree on some of your critisism. But as it was a requested story, I only got so much info before the requester, a friend from deviantart clammed up like an oyster. When doing requests the more i get the more i return so to speak. Though I was tempted to expand her bathroom visit considerably. Happy holidays!
Date: Dec 25, 2008 06:48 pm [Report This]
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