Pretty good. I would say there could have been more backstory like off handed comments about the princess and greater foreshadowing, but still very good nonetheless.
I'm wondering, will there a sequel of some kind?
I'm glad you enjoyed it ^_^
While I did the series, I did concider doing a 'Pee Fight' sequel.
I may still do it, but it'll be awhile if I do
Thanks, as always, for sharing.
Pretty good, though not quite as good as the first two.
I guess we'll finally see something about the host in the next chapter.
Why don't you think it's not quite as good as the previous two?
becouse their poo was liquified?
And yes, the mystery girl will finally be revealed in the last chapter ^_^
Not bad, while the concept is a bit odd, it's pretty nice for a fetish fic nonetheless. And I can see you're hinting at some deeper plot as Amy apperantly knew the girl over the intercom.
Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: hehe, it's not that much of a plot, but as I'm sure you've guessed, the owner of the mystery voice will be revealed ^_^
Author's Response: I haven't forgotten about this series, don't worry, I'll finish it eventually ^_^
Great work, Anime Lover.
Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m glad you like it, I already have planned who will make it to the final round, when I eventually get there. ^_^; I haven\'t started round two yet