Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: whatthat Signed
Well I have a new fetish. Congratulations!
More seriously, very well written. I enjoy the character interactions and the very matter-of-fact behaviour from all concerned. I'm impressed by your musical and corporate knowledge also!
Date: Sep 28, 2015 05:51 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5 Reviewer: kozinc Signed
This is an awesome story! Maybe you could write a sequel or another chapter sometime?
Date: Jul 08, 2014 01:35 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5 Reviewer: secretaccount122 Signed
Are you continuing this story? I mean, wow! I admit it isn't quite satisfy me as a fetish, yes I said it, it's incredibly interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing the particle accelerators they halve to use to make an obsorbant enough diaper for Christa.
Date: Apr 28, 2012 01:25 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5 Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
This story is a little over the top, but quite entertaining. Very nice imagery and dialog. Obviously I loved reading about "a virtual peeing machine with a seemingly unlimited supply of nectar" (great wording, by the way), but Ginny's modest yet relieving pee is also described well. I wish you described her changing her diaper and putting her clothes back on, though. I like how you showed us desperate and bediapered women besides Christa and Ginny. Brenda's deep amazement helps make things interesting.

You seem to find endless words to describe urine and bladders. Here's my favorite sentence: "The restroom, filled up until now with sounds of quiet instructions and opening/closing of stall doors, was once again privy to the sound of a pee stream, uniquely female in origin, yet resonating deeply beyond the large stall, filling the room with sound and extending into the sink area, where more desperate females awaited bliss relief."

Great job! An instant classic!

Author's Response: Jimmy, thanks for the positive review. It seems I may have finally found an audience for these types of stories. I agree that the clothes changing scene could have been further developed. As far as it being "over the top", no argument here. All of my stories involve a need to suspend disbelief in order to be enjoyed, much as many of the poo related stories I've read here. And Christa's great endowment is on the low end of my character spectrum. :) I'm glad you enjoyed my descriptions. As you can tell, the reactions of others to how long or hard a woman can pee is nearly on par, in my mind, to the actions of the infinite pee-er. There are many instances of character disbelief / amazement in my writing. Glad again you enjoyed it, looking forward to contributing more.
Date: Feb 02, 2010 11:57 am [Report This]


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