Reviews For Emergency Release
Great Fic, I take it Drake must play Zombie Video Games to mutter something about Zombies, lol.
Date: Jun 06, 2013 02:11 am [Report This]
"The monster landed atop the first and slowly curled over it like a snake slithering over a fallen tree trunk." Great simile! :)
Not much else to comment on. This is a pretty straightforward little story, and I don't know the characters. But I will point out that you typed "quite" when you meant "quit," and that the length you give for Chloe's 1st log appears to be a typo.
Author's Response: Noted. Now, if you've got a PS3..... GO OUT AND PLAY THIS GAME! *Crazy ninja eyes of 'youmustdoasIcommandorelse!'* XP
Not much else to comment on. This is a pretty straightforward little story, and I don't know the characters. But I will point out that you typed "quite" when you meant "quit," and that the length you give for Chloe's 1st log appears to be a typo.
Author's Response: Noted. Now, if you've got a PS3..... GO OUT AND PLAY THIS GAME! *Crazy ninja eyes of 'youmustdoasIcommandorelse!'* XP
Date: May 30, 2010 11:57 pm [Report This]
Very good, as usual. When I played through Uncharted 2 I often found myself having similar fantasies about Chloe. It was nice to read one of them :).
Date: May 26, 2010 01:08 pm [Report This]
nice story, and glad to see you posting again.
Date: May 23, 2010 03:16 am [Report This]
Waw, finally Oprheum back into action! Nice to have u back! Great story as usual and I hope you will finish the next Sakura installment
Date: May 22, 2010 04:46 am [Report This]