Title: Embarassment and Relief Reviewer: TheBat1 Signed
Do MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR
Date: Oct 20, 2018 02:20 am [Report This]
Title: Embarassment and Relief Reviewer: slimplayer1 Signed
More please
Date: Sep 27, 2018 02:41 am [Report This]
Title: Embarassment and Relief Reviewer: ScarletKirito Signed
Very good, Will there be another part?
Date: Jun 10, 2015 09:25 pm [Report This]
Title: Embarassment and Relief Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed
It's a good first effort, but could use a lot of work. For one, the girls don't seem quite in character beyond a few quips. Tsunade is pretty aloof, but would have at least made some rude comments here or there just to tease the girls, while Hinata would have been conflicted with her normal shyness to just readily admit anything, be it a fetish or her obvious crush on Naruto. Overall, it's still quite nice, but I can see a lot more potential if this is just given more time and work.

Author's Response: Well to be fair, I always had a hard time getting any canon character in character, even after watching the show multiple times. But I think next time I'll give future chapters some more time and work, and see how I can work it out. Thanks for the advice. :)
Date: Jul 02, 2011 10:14 pm [Report This]


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