I really wish we had more chapters...and things like farts with pooping, related fetish stuff like cramping etc...I'm sure I could go on forever if I just collected my thoughts.
This is a really cool story (and I'm glad you write) but if it were rewritten it could be damn perfect...or rather so much closer to perfection than what it is now. Also I agree with indulging in fetishes like vomit. That stuff is both cool and but often overlooked.
Reviews For Laxative
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: SilentBadge Signed
excellent buildup with the farting and would love more of that. Toilet room is cool too.
Date: Nov 20, 2011 12:33 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5 Reviewer: Anastyanax Signed
Superb. The buildup with her being gassy, her loss of control and gradual progression into play contribute to a consistent eroticism.
Date: Nov 07, 2011 07:21 pm [Report This]