Reviews For Checkup Complications
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: donkeykong207 Signed
great job but i kind of want to hear the story of her sharting at volleyball. can you do that?
Date: Dec 28, 2014 07:56 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
Great job describing her outfit. I had a wonderful mental picture while reading this. It's fun to read about a very "together" woman being put in an impossible predicament. And this woman is put through some delightful humiliation with the farting, panty-staining, and diapering. The messing is described with excellent detail. Like the other reviewers, I think you should have put more attention into her desperation. You could show it progress from a nuisance to a disaster waiting to happen. But for the most part you tell the story well. The snippy nurse and the cool and collected doctor are great characters for this scenario. The line about spanking seems over the top. But for the most part the story maintains a realistic feel, even if it is a bit of a stretch to believe. Fingers rap against wood, not wrap. There are a few other typos, but no serious problems understanding the text. Overall this is the best pooping fic I've read in a while. I look forward to your next story.
Date: Sep 16, 2012 12:51 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: paragon Signed
Not a bad interpretation of what I was thinking of! Even though I'm more into desperation than humiliation, you did an entertaining job of it nonetheless, especially during the parts where her mess is discovered and she asks for a diaper.
Date: Sep 14, 2012 01:58 am [Report This]