The story was amazing. I just wish you would have showed some of the other girls having the same thing you know like ' as she was walking by with her bloated gut, she could she other girls with even bigger guts. She can also hear, smell, and feel the other girl's farts as she continued her walk back to her room'. Something like that

This is certainly entertaining. There's not much of a plot, but you do a great job of describing Nikki's kitty features and her session on the litterbox.

Author's Response: Thanks. The story is as barebones as it is because I couldn't really come up with anything creative to do with this theme. So I just went with the completely vague "military experimentation" thing and didn't bother to give it any detail, then stole the name of the phlebotinum from Spinnerette for a bonus to anyone that recognized it.

Well, I thought this was pretty outstanding. The characters were nicely done and believable, as were the behaviors of the... animals. I didn't see it playing out the way it did, but what you produced was much better that what I expected.

Very well done.