Reviews For Tricks of Earth and Urine
Title: Chapter 1- Tricks of Earth and Urine Reviewer: decided Anonymous
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Date: Jul 03, 2014 01:05 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1- Tricks of Earth and Urine Reviewer: random guy Anonymous
Date: Jul 25, 2011 07:22 pm [Report This]
cool story
Date: Apr 03, 2011 03:26 pm [Report This]
lol you houl make another one like this
Date: Sep 02, 2010 07:20 am [Report This]
actually, EFROdian, i wrote a story like that on the Animegirldesp. She does that to all 3 of them. Read part2 though, part 1 sucks
and Animelover, PLZ write a story about Azula's PEE desperation. PLZ?
Date: May 26, 2010 05:30 pm [Report This]
As far as characterizations go, I believe you made Toph a bit more calm and serene then she was portrayed in the actual series. She was a bit more rambunctious and spunky ine the series and you toned downed her personality quite a bit.....or unless it was intentional for you to do that.
Date: May 03, 2008 10:28 pm [Report This]
I see. I was never great at imagining exact positions and exact directions in stories. Sorry!
Date: May 03, 2008 10:06 pm [Report This]
I see. I'm glad it's that because it looked hot that way.^_^
I assume Katara was looking at Toph from behind her.
Author's Response: Katara was never actually directly behind Toph, before Toph discovered her, Katara was behind Toph and to her left. and when Toph knocked Katara forward, Katara slid up to Toph's left side.
Date: May 03, 2008 09:56 pm [Report This]
Garret, you once again demonstrated your talent at making something as gross as shit and flatulence sexually erotic. It was especially hot when Katare looked at the nude Toph taking a dump and actually seeing her shit coming out of her ass.
One question though, was Toph squatting with legs apart like a " horse stance" or was she simply squated by crouching
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it.
Toph was squatting with her legs apart
Date: May 03, 2008 08:19 pm [Report This]
Another great fic involving the dynamic duo Katara and Toph. I love those antics that you have them pull on each other all the time. Wow, I knew Katara could bend her own pee, but I never thought of her putting it back into someone else! What a great trick to play on Azula, Mai, or even Ty Lee (Ty Lee can't use her special pressure points if her hands are too busy holding her crotch). Katara merely has to bend water into her opponent, and voila, instant distraction. More please!
Date: Oct 26, 2007 04:00 am [Report This]