Beautiful, just beautiful *single tear*. I'm not kidding. Even before I started writing, I enjoyed reading this story. I don't care what other people say about 'plagarism'. This is a fanfic website. Who gives a crap (pun intended)? You'ver earned these 5 stars.

I have a bad feeling about this one. I noticed after looking closely that some of this story seems to be almost directly lifted from one of BlueSniper's works. Specifically these two sentences pop out at me.

“Got a...urgh...good view...mmph...back there?” Gretchen asked, shuffling slightly as her stomach continued to bubble.

It was Tabitha’s turn to blush. “Sorry. Didn’t mean to stare.”

Not sure if this is coincidence or if this is actual plagarism, but Ryder you need to re-write this story.