Wile I started reading One Piece from the beginning, it was the Arlong Park story arc that made me a true fan. Few times have I been so emotionally invested in a story and the opening of this captures that feeling, so it already starts from a good place for me.

This reads like a sweet, funny story that happens to have pooping in it as opposed to the toilet focus you normally see from short stories here.

I completely believe the characters doing this. Nami's mom would certainly have had that kind of practical attitude and passed it on to her children.

As a lot of the action centered around young girls and their mom, I didn't find it as sexy as some of your work, but very enjoyable as a story.

Author's Response:

Not even the bits with Belle-Mere at least? :P

Anyway, thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it and felt it was fitting to the story. I do admit it's rather short, but kind of fits that way with the original scene in a way instead of dragging out for the sake of a silly "needs to have this many words/pages" habit. If you haven't, don't forget to check out the other stories as you get further into the series and familiar with the girls.