You must login (register) to review.
Title: Pinpoint Reviewer: diokno44x Signed
JW, it's cause this story, originally on FimFic, had ponies
Date: Jul 03, 2015 08:30 pm [Report This]
Title: Epilogue Reviewer: JWPoop Signed

I love the premiss, and your descriptions of the pooping are wonderful, but why use ponies?  That really ruins the turn on. It would have been much better if we could have identified with the charactors in a more sexual way!!

 

Date: Jul 03, 2015 04:59 pm [Report This]
Title: Pinpoint Reviewer: EagleWing Signed
Nicely done, it reads well and I like how you described things. So far so good.
Date: Jul 02, 2015 07:24 pm [Report This]
Title: Pinpoint Reviewer: diokno44x Signed
Love it, as I did on FimFic
Date: Jul 02, 2015 06:53 pm [Report This]
You must login (register) to review.