I'm here to state simple fact: Mad Moxxi is really, ridiculously goddamn hot. I want to see her poop.
(...yes, I've been playing through Borderlands 2 again recently, why do you ask?)
So, I know it's been a long time since I've written anything, but I'm seriously considering a story with her. Probably not very long, just pure poop smut for the first smut, but I figured I'd make a thread for this story (and any future stories I end up writing) to gauge potential interest, since if people here want to see this story, I'm much more likely to actually get off my duff and write it.
So, anybody interested?
Current idea: a second person POV type story where Moxxi has discovered that the reader has an interest in women's bowel movements, and teases them by saving up a massive dump and finally relieving herself (very sensually, of course) in front of them to turn them on. And maybe she even gets off on it a little bit too~
(Honestly, Moxxi is kinky as hell and she's into pretty much everything, so it's not even really that far fetched).
But I am just starting on it, so if anyone else has ideas for other scenarios, or additional details to add, let me know! I can't promise anything, but I feel strangely pumped about this.
Only idea I can think of is that she could get more and more depraved with the pooping activities. First time is just a huge dump in the toilet, second has her trying panty pooping, and then maybe getting some of the other Borderland girls involved in some capacity. Hopefully this new jaunt might even give you some side-ideas for the next Fran story. =D
I always vote for panty pooping over just going, don't really care about it unless its in clothes. Otherwise, you should do more FE stuff :X And yeah, I do agree that Moxxi would probably go along with anything x.x
Quote from: OrpheumZero on November 29, 2015, 09:38:12 PM
Only idea I can think of is that she could get more and more depraved with the pooping activities. First time is just a huge dump in the toilet, second has her trying panty pooping, and then maybe getting some of the other Borderland girls involved in some capacity. Hopefully this new jaunt might even give you some side-ideas for the next Fran story. =D
I like it! I think that would work really well with multiple chapters, each featuring a different activity.
blooper, don't fret, I will probably have her filling her frilly silk underwear in the second part, but I want to start with her taking a good old fashioned dump on the potty. I've written a little bit of the beginning, but I still have yet to decide where she should do the deed. I have to say, every time I open one of those Port-a-Potty chests in Borderlands 2, I can't help but imagine Moxxi using one to push out a huge load of poop...but, it would also be harder for her to inspect her "output" that way (which it's not too hard to imagine her doing, as she's not exactly a squeamish woman.)
My other idea involves those random toilets that you often see sitting out in the open in that game, which always seem to have ammo inside...it would be nice to see one of them finally used for its intended purpose. Who knows, maybe she buries a box of shotgun shells under her massive turds :D
Anyway, I'm still in the early stages of writing it, so if anybody has any other ideas, please don't hesitate to post them here!
Quote from: Toasty on December 06, 2015, 03:02:03 PM
I like it! I think that would work really well with multiple chapters, each featuring a different activity.
blooper, don't fret, I will probably have her filling her frilly silk underwear in the second part, but I want to start with her taking a good old fashioned dump on the potty. I've written a little bit of the beginning, but I still have yet to decide where she should do the deed. I have to say, every time I open one of those Port-a-Potty chests in Borderlands 2, I can't help but imagine Moxxi using one to push out a huge load of poop...but, it would also be harder for her to inspect her "output" that way (which it's not too hard to imagine her doing, as she's not exactly a squeamish woman.)
My other idea involves those random toilets that you often see sitting out in the open in that game, which always seem to have ammo inside...it would be nice to see one of them finally used for its intended purpose. Who knows, maybe she buries a box of shotgun shells under her massive turds :D
Anyway, I'm still in the early stages of writing it, so if anybody has any other ideas, please don't hesitate to post them here!
Sounds good. If you can find a way to include all the hotties, that'd be great. Hell, maybe even a funny bit with Tiny Tina for the hell of it. Knowing that Edward like weirdo, she'd probably have some quirky things to say as they all unloaded.
Hah, yeah, adding Tina would make for some pretty hilarious dialogue, plus she's pretty cute. I'll definitely put her in somewhere. And then of course Gaige <3 (which should make paragon happy, I think he mentioned she was the star of his dream picture once), the sirens obviously...and I've always found Tannis weirdly attractive in spite of (maybe because of?) the fact that she's so crazy :P
Alright! I'm feeling pumped now. Hopefully I can get the first chapter up sometime soon! Wish me luck, everybody!
Good luck, bro! This is going to be awesome!
Godspeed, Toasty.
Quote from: Toasty on December 06, 2015, 05:27:17 PM
Hah, yeah, adding Tina would make for some pretty hilarious dialogue, plus she's pretty cute. I'll definitely put her in somewhere. And then of course Gaige <3 (which should make paragon happy, I think he mentioned she was the star of his dream picture once), the sirens obviously...and I've always found Tannis weirdly attractive in spite of (maybe because of?) the fact that she's so crazy :P
Alright! I'm feeling pumped now. Hopefully I can get the first chapter up sometime soon! Wish me luck, everybody!
Gaige? That'd be cool, since she's played by Nami's English VA if I'm not mistaken. And really, I'd say go for every girl you can. Heck, a random thought could be Moxxi discovering a shit fetish by random, and triggering a craze amongst the rest of the Borderlands girls, maybe with some competing to see who can produce the most.
If you make her hold it too long it may be a real struggle for her to get it out....maybe she'd even need some help!!!
UPDATE: Still working on it. Almost about to hit 1000 words, which might not sound like much, but it's more than I've written in a long, long, LONG time. What can I say, I guess I'm just motivated by the thought of Moxxi pushing a big, thick turd outta her cute, bodacious butt <3
Just so you know I'm serious, here's a brief sample of the good stuff:
QuoteNot about to decline, you step closer to her in a state of awe. A tinkling sound and a splash of yellow from between her legs indicate that she's started releasing her urine, as well. "Ahhhh...you don't have to pretend like you're not excited, sugar. It's part of my job to stay well informed, and you'd be surprised how word gets around a place like Sanctuary. When I heard rumors about your...particular interests, I made up my mind right then to invite you out here..." She spreads her legs, stretching her panties out between her ankles. This changes the angle of her pee, and you hear a splattering as it hits the top of the shotgun shells, her piss rapidly filling up the empty space and overflowing the box.
"I wanted to give you...unh...a private show..." She gives a soft grunt and you can see a delicate, rounded, light brown tip begin to emerge from between her cheeks.
Second person perspective, huh? Don't think we've had many stories like that. It's usually just third-person and a few first person narratives.
Can't wait to see the finished story, and hopefully all the ideas might inspire more Moxxi antics.
If you've seen the glitch where you can get under the floor of her shop in the second game to peek up her dress, something along those lines could make for a great scenario at a later points. Someone tries to peep on her, and she finds out to give them a great show? Or maybe she realizes her skimpy dress draws so much attention and adjusts it to be even skimpier. =D
Quote from: Toasty on December 06, 2015, 05:27:17 PMGaige <3
Back from the underworld to say that I approve of this.
Also, anyone else notice the random panties stamped with the Vault symbol lying around the game world? I imagined all the BL girls just happened to wear that brand and left them lying around after "using" them.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Fi01jRHtSM#
Figured since I had posted the voice clips of Maya and Lilith some ways back in the rare things thread, here's something of Gaige making noises. Have to wonder what most of these women think when being asked to make grunts like that. Shame there's no grunts for Moxxi, or that I know of since all her clips are just dialogue.
Unfortunately I don't play this game, but now this Gaige character makes me want to play it. Or at least write a character who's a thinly-veiled version of her. I look forward to whatever comes of this.
Still working on the Moxxie story. I'm at just over a thousand words, and I've finally gotten to the "good part" (i.e. she's pooping :) ), but I'm still sort of waiting for inspiration to strike so I can write the rest of it.
In the meantime, however, I had a pair of story ideas that I figured I'd post here:
1. Star Wars! If you've seen the new Star Wars movie, you'll know that Rey (played by Daisy Ridley, who I think is a total cutie <3) starts out as a scavenger on the desert planet Jakku who makes a living scrounging parts from wrecked starships and trading them with a junk dealer. And by trading junk, she gets rations, which don't look...super great quality. So one can only imagine what they would do to her bowels :D
What if, after eating these crappy rations for a while, she gets *really* constipated and doesn't poop for days and days...and all of a sudden she has to go while exploring an abandoned star destroyer? I mean, it's totally deserted, so she could go to the bathroom wherever she wants...the whole ship is her toilet! Maybe it's like a game to her, and she tries to find the most fun place to drop her load. The captain's chair, into the trash compactor chute, maybe she pushes out her thick turds into the shield generator control panel, just for kicks. I think the possibilities there could be really entertaining! I might write it eventually, but if someone else feels like giving it a shot, go right ahead!
Phew, that took a while to write and I'm about to head out to a bar to hang with some peeps, so that's all I'm going to post for now. I'll tell my other idea later, I guess. Peace!
Okay, now that I've sobered up from last night's revelry, I'll post my second idea:
2. I'm currently reading these novels set in a sort of fantasy renaissance setting called the Gentleman Bastard series by Scott Lynch (they're amazing, by the way, I highly recommend them). They star a group of lovable thieves who specialize in elaborate schemes designed to con wealthy, complacent nobles out of their money.
At the beginning of the second novel, our heroes are playing (and cheating) at a game called Carousel Hazard in an exclusive, high stakes casino. The game is essentially a variation of poker played in teams of two, but the interesting part is that the loser of each hand has to drink a vial which is dispensed at random from a spinning, mechanical carousel. The vials contain different types of alcohol of varying strengths, and the team that passes out from inebriation first is the loser.
Well...what if instead of (or in addition to) alcohol, the vials also contained laxatives and diuretics? And did I mention that in the book the opponents are a pair of beautiful women who are well respected socialites in fancy evening dresses? :D
I think you can see where I'm going with this.
Again, I guess I might write something with this idea one day, but if anyone likes it enough to try and do something with it, I say go right ahead!
It...is...finished...bluuugh...
http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=943
*falls asleep forever*
(honestly it's not even that long or good, so I don't know why it wore me out so much...just outta practice I guess)
I felt it was pretty good, and the dump was plenty big for a busty babe like Moxxi. Maybe it wasn't going to put "A Viera and her bowels" to shame, but like you said, you're probably just a bit rusty. And that's hardly a bad thing as it happens to anyone who takes an extended break from writing.
So I'm replaying Paper Mario: The Thousand Year door, and I just had an idea for a story involving voyeurism while Princess Peach is on the throne...so to speak.
Watch out for it!
Cool to know. Been wondering when you would do more Peach stuff.
Just hit 1,000 words, and I haven't even gotten to the "fun part" yet! That's a pretty good sign, I think, since the beginning parts of a story usually take the longest for me.
Quote from: Toasty on December 15, 2016, 03:42:14 PMJust hit 1,000 words, and I haven't even gotten to the "fun part" yet! That's a pretty good sign, I think, since the beginning parts of a story usually take the longest for me.
Couldn't wait for it, hopefully Peach is suffering a certain problem.... *uhuk*constipation*uhuk*
How's the Peach story coming along?