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Started by Jimmy Olsen, October 05, 2007, 04:47:22 AM

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Jimmy Olsen

I finally got around to uploading 2 of my fics. The rest require more work before I'll feel good posting them again. I'm leaving the Naa story out since there's no desperation or pooping in it, even though it sets up a poop story.

Enjoy "Tazarel and the Giantess" and "The Long Walk Home."  ^_^

Now here's a funny link for no reason: http://www.superdickery.com/index.php?option=com_content&view=article&id=1011:jimmy-olsens-hate-in&catid=29:confounding-comic-covers-index&Itemid=32  ^_^

Edit: The linked page moved, so I changed the link accordingly.
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Anime Lover

I read the giant one and the only problem I had with it is that you included my character, Lynn Kiddo in your characters section, I'm sure it was a mistake, but you should remove it the next time you get the chance.
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FallenStar

Oh come on, AL...


You know he only did that because he, like me, loves Lynn so much...   :p



Seriously, yeah... he shouldn't have done that, but as you said, it was prolly just a mistake, so no worries...



FallenStar

Nobody betta lay a finger on mah girl, Hotaru, or else!  xD

Jimmy Olsen

That's odd.  When I previewed it before submitting it it said "Characters: 0."  At any rate it should be fixed now.
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#4
Update: I put up some challenges, in case you're looking for ideas.

Further update: I put up a story I just wrote called "Time."
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Update: I put up "The Princess and the Pee" (revised).
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Update: I put up Chapter 1 of "The Wonderful Artifact of Naa."  Anyone who wants to is free to write Chapter 2.
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Update: I put up a story I wrote yesterday called "Urina."  Like "Tazarel and the Giantess" and "Time" it was written within 1 day based on an plot I came up with within a few minutes, so it should be well-unified, if not particularly complex or nuanced.  I will do a more thorough proofreading of it soon.
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S.T. the Kitsune

Jimmy is it possible for you to type a story about mortal man wanting to marry a gaintess?
Me: You fools there's a triangle of creation that's all around us! That's Energy, Matter, and Thought. Yes your thoughts can make the world go boom...it just take longer.

Jimmy Olsen

Quote from: S.T. the Kitsune on October 11, 2007, 09:58:14 AM
Jimmy is it possible for you to type a story about mortal man wanting to marry a gaintess?

I will write a story like that if I can think of a good plot for it.  I already have an idea about a Centaur man who wants to marry a human woman, but first needs to find a way that they can have "marital relations," which seems impossible because his "manhood" is too big for her.  So I might just write that instead.
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Update: I put up "The Lights Go Down," my entry in Contest IV.
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Update: I uploaded a story-beginning to the Nyou 2 "stories" forum (not worthy of Nyou Fiction).

Funny link for no reason: http://www.superdickery.com/index.php?option=com_content&view=article&id=1060:most-nonsensical-cover-ever-yes&catid=29:confounding-comic-covers-index&Itemid=32

Edit: The linked page moved, so I changed the link accordingly.
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Update: I finally added a new story to Nyou Fiction.  It's a little different, but please check it out.

Funny link for no reason: http://www.superdickery.com/index.php?option=com_content&view=article&id=1068:jimmy-vs-the-little-people&catid=29:confounding-comic-covers-index&Itemid=32

Edit: The linked page moved, so I changed the link accordingly.
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Update: Added 2 more commercials (as chapters of the original).  I am open to suggestions for new products.

Funny link for no reason: http://icanhascheezburger.com/category/mythbusters/
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Poowrite

Great LolCat :)
http://images.mylot.com/userImages/images/postphotos/1538133.jpg
is one of my favorites

Anyhoo, in regards to my review of your second chapter, "Still passable" should probably have been "Still, passable." I didn't mean to imply that the writing itself was merely passable ^^.

Will read/review the 3rd chapter l8r.

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