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So, hello everybody. I figured I would test out our new commissions board with a little poll. Seeing as how I just finished up the biggest project I've ever worked on (my FFXII story), I've been wondering exactly what I should do next. I've had a few ideas floating around in my brain for a while now, so I thought I'd ask the community of this site what they think I should be doing. The ideas I've been thinking about are as follows:

1. A new story in the Fire Emblem series

I made a series for my Fire Emblem stories in the first place because there's so many damn characters and I couldn't write about just one of them. This next story is going to be about everybody's favorite heavily armored cutie, Amelia. I gathered in the reviews that not many of you were familiar with Fire Emblem, so I'll provide a picture:

(http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/fireemblem/images/a/af/Amelia-1-.jpg)

Basically, she promoted into a knight class that specializes in extremely heavy armor. So when she has to go on the battlefield, she needs the help of her love interest Franz to get out of all that heavy platemail in time. Needless to say, it results in one big mess and one relieved girl.

2. Harry Potter story featuring Hermione

Ah yes, Hermione. Everybody knows that geek girls are X-treme hawtness, so I've wanted to write a story about her for quite a while. Basically, my idea is to have her faced with the task of clogging Moaning Myrtle's toilet. Since she needs to make it look like an accident to avoid getting in trouble, she decides to use the all-natural method...with perhaps a touch of magical enhancement to increase her output.

3. The further adventures of Fran and Penelo

Orpheum, you mentioned this in your review, about writing a prequel story about how Penelo first discovered that she liked pantypooping. I'd definitely want to write something like that, featuring her younger and more carefree days gallavanting around Rabanastre with Vaan, getting herself into a tight spot, and eventually messing herself by accident.

On the other hand, I'd also like to write a story that builds on what I already have, especially if I could get Ashe into the mix. Who knows, maybe that threesome might end up being like the FFXII counterpart to the infamous Gullwings whose pooping adventures have already been extensively chronicled on this site.

Either way, if you have interest in seeing another story in this universe, vote for this option and say specifically what you'd like in the thread.



All right, those are the ideas at the forefront as of now, there are a few more on the back burner but they need more time to be fully fleshed out. I leave the choice entirely in your hands.

Man, those Harry Potter idea is great! I hope this vote going on well  :kawaii:

*Pulls out Dragoon Laser and readied Maximum Burst*

Everyone, give your vote to Hermione!!! Or else....  >:(

Yes sir!

Heres another Hermione vote.

And another  ;)

 :'(  :'(  :'(

Thank you! Thank you so much my dear friends!!!  :kawaii:

Lol, just kidding but I'm glad all of you had the same interest as me. Now, all we have to do is wait for a nice scene of Hermione Granger took a nice and big dump!

Can it be written with a British accent?  ;D

Well, it looks like the people have spoken. I'll get to work on our adorable lil' Hermione first. It's a good thing she learned that spell that makes you have to poop a lot. I wonder if that would be transfiguration, or charms...hmmm, I'll have to think on this.

A British accent? I'll try my best, but you might have to use your imagination. Maybe I'll have her say things like, "colour" and "armour" and "centre".

Alright, I'll quit yapping here and go get to writing. See you guys when it's done!

*disappears with a BAMF and a puff of smoke that smells like...cotton candy?*

Just curious, Toasty how it's going? Great, I hope  ;D

^^^

It's been going fairly well. I have a pretty solid idea for how I want the story to go, so that's taken care of. Now I just have to write the damn thing. I have the beginning done and I'm moving on to the main body of the story. All told, I have about a page and a half finished.

Hopefully, I'll be done before the end of May.

Just take your time  ;)

I'm sure it would become a great hit for Hermione's fans!!!

Just asking how is it going? I hope you are making progress.

Dear God, I just realized it's been a month and a half since I first posted this!

Sorry about that guys. I sort of ran into a bit of a creativity snag during the writing that led me to lose interest for a couple of weeks. But I have been making progress on it, and I'd say I'm at least 3/4 of the way done. If I just buckle down and make the final push, I should have it done in a couple of days. So that's what I'll try to do.

Well, at least it's better than that one year when I didn't write ANYTHING. Hopefully I'll never go through a dry spell like that again.

Stay tuned!

For what it's worth, I would love to read an armor soiling.  I read one a while ago that's not on the site (by Poowrite, I think), and it was very entertaining.  I would like to see this topic revisited.  ^-^

Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on June 21, 2009, 01:53:57 AM
For what it's worth, I would love to read an armor soiling.  I read one a while ago that's not on the site (by Poowrite, I think), and it was very entertaining.  I would like to see this topic revisited.  ^-^

Oh you mean those Suikoden III fanfics written by poowrite  ^-^

I still have it, but it should be Poowrite himself who post it  :P

Yeah, I still have that one also. I believe it was posted under the title "A Knight's Story", or something similar. You should go bug Poowrite to upload it here.

Anyway, in response to Jimmy, I'm planning to get through all of these ideas in due time, so I'll work on the Amelia one right after I finish this Hermione story.

Hey Toasty...any chance you might do the MGS idea you posted? I mean, I voted for the Amelia story, so in no way would I be disappointed if you chose to do that...but I figured I'd ask.

Quote from: Toasty on June 21, 2009, 11:12:39 AMAnyway, in response to Jimmy, I'm planning to get through all of these ideas in due time, so I'll work on the Amelia one right after I finish this Hermione story.

Great!  I look forward to it!  ^-^

HEAR YE HEAR YE!

The Hermione story is finally up. I hope you enjoy, and please review if you have any comments or criticisms.

Now that that's done, I can start taking votes for what my next story will be. So stay tuned to this thread!

*Put the Desert Eagle back in the holster and looking at Toasty straight on his eyes*

"Well done my boy! You have completed your quest! Now you should step up to the higher level quest!"

Just kidding  :P

Anyway, I vote for something completely different but still with defecation theme. I would love to see Alicia from Valkyrie Profile 2 taking a huge, constipated dump. Want to know how Silmeria would act in this circumstance.

And thanks for the HP fic! It's amazing!

Okay, here's the descriptions for the new ideas, including a repost of the Amelia one just for you to compare.


1. A new story in the Fire Emblem series

I made a series for my Fire Emblem stories in the first place because there's so many damn characters and I couldn't write about just one of them. This next story is going to be about everybody's favorite heavily armored cutie, Amelia. I gathered in the reviews that not many of you were familiar with Fire Emblem, so I'll provide a picture:

(http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/fireemblem/images/a/af/Amelia-1-.jpg)

Basically, she promoted into a knight class that specializes in extremely heavy armor. So when she has to go on the battlefield, she needs the help of her love interest Franz to get out of all that heavy platemail in time. Needless to say, it results in one big mess and one relieved girl.


2. A Story About Sniper Wolf Soiling Herself


As a sniper, this belligerent babe is often forced to remain in one place for days on end waiting for her target to appear.

I really don't have to spell this one out for you guys, do I? I think everyone can acknowledge the appeal of seeing this Wolf answer nature's call...in her pants!

If you're unfamiliar with the character, here's a relevant picture by our resident artist livinginfinite:

(http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/1208/41011020.jpg)

However, my version of the event will probably be somewhat more firm...but no less messy!


3. The Hotties from Odin Sphere Doing Some Quality Bathroom Bonding


This one originates from an idea I had a few months ago, and I started writing this story in February, but about 2/3 of the way through I got distracted by other stuff (shocking!). Basically, my idea involves two characters from the awesome and beautiful game Odin Sphere, Gwendolyn the Valkyrie:

(http://ranka.imouto.org/sample/92de448617264a99a4cbc70b96172920/moe%2042260%20sample.jpg)
I am both terrified and aroused.

(without armor):
(http://static3.animepaper.net/upload/thumbs/wallpapers/Odin-Sphere/%5Blarge%5D%5BAnimePaper%5Dwallpapers_Odin-Sphere_sotodefonk(1.33)__THISRES__68927.jpg)
Wait a minute...yep, now I'm just aroused.

and her estranged half-sister Velvet:

(http://ui28.gamespot.com/1371/odinsphere1_2.jpg)
I believe her trunk contains a not insignificant amount of junk.

Forced to go on the run, they end up hiding in an abandoned outhouse. Awesome buddy (errr, estranged sisterly?) dumpage ensues, as well as emotional bonding. Awww.

This option has the advantage of probably being finished faster than the other two, since it's mostly done.



So, there's my ideas for the next batch. Remember, they'll all get done eventually, so don't hesitate to vote for your favorite!

Also, Zee Phyro, I don't think I'd be able to do a Valkyrie Profile fic, because I've never played any of the games before, although I'd like to. Even though you voted already, if you want to change your vote (I mean, Odin Sphere also has Valkyries in it!) I'll count it as such when tallying up the poll

Happy voting people! (Well, at least I hope everyone hasn't voted already. You guys are fast!)

you can edit the poll and check the option: "Allow user to change vote." if you want

*Flies by, riding atop a giant rocket propelled gopher and snatches away the Metal Gear Solid idea*

MINE! @__@

*Laughs madly into the starry sky*

*Pulls stinger missile launcher from out of nowhere, locks on to gopher, and fires*

(Solid Snake voice) Gotcha!

*missile scores direct hit, flaming gopher chunks rain down on the landscape*

(Snake voice) Not too bad!

Anyway...

Duce, I'm not seeing that option under the edit poll menu. Are you sure it's enabled?

*Lies facedown on the ground, apparently dead*

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*Fingers twitch and head snaps up*

Think again!

*Laughs and bounces off like a spazy Daffy Duck, jumping into a river*

yeah, it's there or at least it is for me,

(http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/1027/epoll.jpg)

you sure you don't have that option?

Quote from: Toasty on July 01, 2009, 10:33:53 PM
Even though you voted already, f you want to change your vote (I mean, Odin Sphere also has Valkyries in it!) I'll count it as such when tallying up the poll

Uhh fine then.... I'll give my vote to Odin Sphere instead  ;D

Hmmm...maybe it's only for mods? I don't know. Anyway, barring any other votes, Zee acts as the tiebreaker, putting Odin Sphere ahead by one. So I'll get to work on finishing that. If you voted for Amelia or Sniper Wolf, don't fear, I believe this project will be over pretty quickly and I can get to work on those two.

Quote from: Toasty on July 02, 2009, 03:45:50 PM
Hmmm...maybe it's only for mods? I don't know. Anyway, barring any other votes, Zee acts as the tiebreaker, putting Odin Sphere ahead by one. So I'll get to work on finishing that. If you voted for Amelia or Sniper Wolf, don't fear, I believe this project will be over pretty quickly and I can get to work on those two.

yeah, I see, it's seems you need to be able to moderate the board to edit that stuff you can't, but you can when making a new poll, anyways I've enabled the permission to be able to remove your own poll, so next time you can remove it and remake it any way you want it.

Hooray! The new Odin Sphere story is complete. Please read and review, and I hope you enjoy it!

I'll have the new poll up tomorrow, so think long and hard about whether you want Sniper Wolf or Amelia. Modern, or medieval? A lady from Iraq, or the girl from Grado? PSG-1, or Steel Lance? Kevlar, or plate mail? Accident, or...wait a minute, they'll both have nice, biiiiig smelly accidents, so that's one thing you don't need to worry about!

I was thinking about the choices for this next poll, and I realized that if I kept adding new options, and the new ideas kept winning, I might never get around to doing one or two ideas. So now that there are two story candidates left, I'll just have you, the readers, pick one and then after that's done I'll do the other one. Once these two are polished off, I'll whip up a batch of three more ideas and we'll start the process of elimination (heh...elimination. How appropriate.) all over again. Otherwise, poor Jimmy might end up never getting that Amelia story, and that just wouldn't be fair.

Well, that's enough from me. Get to votin', ya varmints!

It looks like I'm not the only one who wants to read an Amelia fic.  ;)

I'm the only one who wants a Sniper Wolf story :(

Geez, last time we had twelve votes, this time it's been over a week and only six? WHAT IS HAPPENING TO THIS PLACE??! *tears off shirt*

Anyway, I guess I might as well start working on the Amelia story.

Cheer up, livinginfinite! You've already got one excellent Sniper Wolf story to read, and another one sometime in the future from me. That's not so bad!

Haha you're right of course. And it looks like at least one other person voted for Sniper Wolf ;D

After a long period of brainstorming, I finally started to write and currently have the first page of the Amelia story done. Hopefully it will go faster from now on.

Toasty out.

Been playing Fire Emblem: The Sacred Stones lately, and I must say I'm looking forward to this story.

Hooray! Another person who has played Fire Emblem! If you're  curious, I'm basing this story mostly on the support conversations between Franz and Amelia. Right now the story is about half the length of the Lute one, and I'm just finishing up the intro, so I think this one will be quite a bit longer. Hope you enjoy!

Just kind of curious... what is this Fire Emblem like actually? I mean, the game.... what is it look like? An RPG?  ???  ???  ???

It looks...kind of like this:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mdjtZPoOKS8 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mdjtZPoOKS8)

Quote from: Toasty on August 08, 2009, 07:50:48 PM
Hooray! Another person who has played Fire Emblem! If you're  curious, I'm basing this story mostly on the support conversations between Franz and Amelia. Right now the story is about half the length of the Lute one, and I'm just finishing up the intro, so I think this one will be quite a bit longer. Hope you enjoy!

I've actually had difficulty using Amelia in-game... She dies so quickly, too quickly, and by the time I have her as a playable character, I'm quite far into the game, too far for her to be useful.

But anyway, I just beat it on Normal mode, and now I'm working on Hard Mode, which is... quite hard. Although, the tower that I can play over and over and over again (and get all my units up to level 20 in the process) is quite useful.

I am interested to see where this story will go, and I'm also interested in how much game info will be incorporated. For example, will Amelia's position as a Trainee have any effect on the story? I don't know, but I'm excited to find out :)

The Amelia story is up!

YAAAAAAY!

Alright. Contest entry finished. And now, work on the Sniper Wolf story has begun...

Alright, the concept for the Sniper Wolf story has been planned out and actual writing has begun. Once I reach this phase, it usually only takes a few writing sessions for a story to reach completion, so now it basically just depends on how fast I can will myself to start putting this thing away. I don't think it will be too long now.

I am so looking forward to this! ;D

By the way, you ever going to type up that Jill Valentine story you had written down? I'm curious.

Well, I actually burned that story a while ago, however I'm pretty sure I remember it well enough to recreate it almost exactly. If you're interested, I'll type it up and post it. It was pretty short, as I recall.

Oh, I'm definitely interested.

Sniper Wolf story is GO!

Next task: probably going to take a stab at the Ahsoka story. We'll see.

Toasty, that was amazing. We are blessed to have your talents in this community. And it certainly doesn't hurt that this is my favorite scenario starring one of my favorite girls.

I do have a similar issue with this as with your last story, though...I'd like to see more sexual content in comparison to the rest of the story. It's an excellent read and I enjoyed it as a story, but since I'm a big perv I expect a certain amount of gratuitousness. If you wanted to address this, you could have her wet herself (I actually thought it was strange that no consideration was given to her need to urinate), and/or include a clean up scene.

edit: Just to be clear, I feel this way about a lot of stories, but you're one of the few authors whose stories I actually read every word in.

Now that Ahsoka has made her debut, what next?

Mayhaps a stab at a Dragon Quest story with either Jessica? Or possibly Mara & Nara from the 4th game? Though of course I have had hopes of seeing a prequel to the "Ingredient" detailing how Penelo developed her pantypooping fetish... of course more Fran pooping would be welcomed as well (or maybe even Ashe... :kawaii:)

Well, unless something else comes up, I was thinking Poison Ivy. I'm not a HUGE Batman fan, but I definitely know Ivy better than I do Ahsoka. And, as you may have noticed, I have a tendency to work, shall we say, sometimes "ambiguous" female homosocial relationships into my stories, so don't be surprised if a certain Ms. Quinn puts in an appearance.

Sorry, Orpheum, I've never played any of the DragonQuest games, so I don't think that's in the cards.  :(

But if you're interested in more FFXII, I can definitely make that happen.

Love that game.

Quote from: Toasty on July 22, 2010, 11:02:59 PM
Well, unless something else comes up, I was thinking Poison Ivy.

Cool.  Somebody needs to write about a woman using a giant Venus flytrap as a toilet.  If you don't, I will.  ;)

Well I would say go for the Ivy story, then trot back over to Franny and give her fanny another starring role.  :P

Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on July 30, 2010, 01:48:21 AM

Quote from: Toasty on July 22, 2010, 11:02:59 PM
Well, unless something else comes up, I was thinking Poison Ivy.

Cool.  Somebody needs to write about a woman using a giant Venus flytrap as a toilet.  If you don't, I will.  ;)

Um, sorry, I wasn't really planning on doing that. Right now I was thinking about having Ivy use some system for storing her poop as fertilizer, and her trying to hide it when Harley comes to visit so that Clown Girl doesn't think Ivy is a weirdo (She'll find it eventually, of course). I'm not really sure how a Venus flytrap would fit into that scenario, but if you have any ideas I'm all ears. Or, you could write a story about it, which I'm sure would be just as entertaining, probably more so!

Quote from: OrpheumZero on July 30, 2010, 02:36:54 PM
Well I would say go for the Ivy story, then trot back over to Franny and give her fanny another starring role.  :P

And, of course, nothing would give me more pleasure than writing about the lovely Fran again. Maybe next time I'll focus on her relationship with the dashing Balthier, who is another one of my favorite characters from that game, and he wasn't really present in my last two stories. He is after all, the leading man.  ;)

Quote from: Toasty on July 30, 2010, 08:58:03 PM

And, of course, nothing would give me more pleasure than writing about the lovely Fran again. Maybe next time I'll focus on her relationship with the dashing Balthier, who is another one of my favorite characters from that game, and he wasn't really present in my last two stories. He is after all, the leading man.  ;)

True. Though of course Ashe needs some loving, and like I mentioned a while back, I think it'd be fun to find out how Penelo developed her little fetish.  :005:

Also, I'm glad people are posting in this thread again. For a while it was kind of dead, and I was wondering if it was a mistake to put my update thread in Commissions instead of the main forum, but now I feel somewhat vindicated.

I chose the sacks, because I think it works in bit of twisted irony.

You're right, I don't know how you'd work a Venus flytrap into that scenerio.  It would gather fertilizer for itself alone (like the coprophagous pitcher plants here: http://www.bogleech.com/bio-plants.html (http://www.bogleech.com/bio-plants.html)).  Still, it would be fun.  Imagine Harley asking where the powder room is and Ivy casually showing her a deadly-looking Venus flytrap with laminae the size of an easy chair and a moist filiform appendage for wiping the user clean.  She'd probably pretend she didn't have to go after all, then hold it in 'til she had access to a normal bathroom.  ^-^

There are toilets like what you describe in real life (example here: http://www.earthwisevalley.org/news.php?p=198& (http://www.earthwisevalley.org/news.php?p=198&)).  Ivy could use some variation on that, perhaps located in the heart of an exotic garden with vines and greenery growing over it, camouflaging it and providing a cushiony seat.

She could also have a watering can/plastic urinal hybrid, so she could fill it up then water the plants.

She could have something like those weird pods in Arkham, and since she can control plants in any way she wishes, it could easily be summoned when she has to 'give back to the earth' or dismissed by having it sink into the ground. The scenario would probably work out with her in her lair somewhere, but that's just my thought.

Has there been any progress?

Err, I've gotten kind of sidetracked from the Poison Ivy story, I'm sorry to say. One day about three weeks ago a really great idea for another FFXII story with Fran and Ashe hit me and I've been working on that ever since. I'm almost done with it, but after that...I don't know. I'll see if I can build up some momentum on the Ivy story, but I have a lot of trouble writing unless I feel really inspired.

I look forward to Fran's next movement!  ;D

Jimmy, don't post any links from Mountain Side Medical again. We have received an official warning and the site might end up going down if you do again.