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OK I was thinking the next should be a pee related theme, since the last three contest's fics, all had the other.

so lets get some theme sugguestions, and I'll put some in a poll and we'll go from there.

Though I'm not much of a pee fan, I'll at least try some ideas.

One possible idea is this: A Naruto theme, and the story is that Sakura and Ino both get attacked by a rogue ninja who uses a strange jutsu that causes their bladders to betray them and they pee themselves.

Another idea: A peeing contest, either 'last girl still dry' or 'biggest piss'. Basically it'd be the Rinoa's shocking loss or that Sailor Moon fic.

And one last suggestion: A pee only version of the first or second contest themes. (No toilet/or unwanted guest).

Otherwise I'm pretty tapped out on what the theme should be. Then again maybe FallenStar will have some better thoughts, he is our resident pee expert, right? :P

Quote from: OrpheumZero on September 11, 2007, 04:33:05 PM

Another idea: A peeing contest, either 'last girl still dry' or 'biggest piss'. Basically it'd be the Rinoa's shocking loss or that Sailor Moon fic.   

Well, damn... if we do that, then I might as well put those two fics (one of them anyway) into the contest to see if they'd win...  :p

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Otherwise I'm pretty tapped out on what the theme should be. Then again maybe FallenStar will have some better thoughts, he is our resident pee expert, right? :P

Really, you give me too much credit... 

I was gonna suggest the same thing... or... how about...

Some other anime characters stumble upon a case of Altaiarean Beverage and interested, they try some of it, OD and.... FD hilarity ensues... 


OR:  A FF FD contest where Tifa gets to go up against the likes of (oh, I don't know) Quistis or Penelo....



FallenStar

A story about a peeing contest for an entry in a story contest about peeing: I like that one.

Really, I like all of them. Except the ones that limit us to certian characters. Even then, remove that limitation and I like them too :).

Aw, come on, Poowrite...  Certainly, YOU wouldn't mind doing a contest between Tifa and Penelo now?  :p




FallenStar

Quote from: FallenStar on September 11, 2007, 07:57:53 PM
Aw, come on, Poowrite...  Certainly, YOU wouldn't mind doing a contest between Tifa and Penelo now?  :p




FallenStar

Well ... no I wouldn't mind that. But I'd rather do Tifa and ... do I really even need to type Yuna's name here?

If I had to choose Final Fantasy characters to do a peeing contest between (sans my favorite summoner and Rikku) It would actually probably be Tifa and Aeris.

Aw, come on...


We need more FFXII fanfics out there. 

Maybe a contest between Penelo and Ashe?  :p


I don't think Fran is needed, though.... there's too much hentai of her already... we need to give Ashe and Penelo their due....  :p


FallenStar

Quote from: FallenStar on September 11, 2007, 09:26:32 PM
Aw, come on...


We need more FFXII fanfics out there. 

Maybe a contest between Penelo and Ashe?  :p


I don't think Fran is needed, though.... there's too much hentai of her already... we need to give Ashe and Penelo their due....  :p


FallenStar

Hey, Fran can't help that she's a supa-hot bunny girl. That's just the way things turned out.

'Course, were I to pick a girl from FFXII it would be Ashe.

I think something like this might make for a nice theme.

http://www.anonib.com/_nyou2/index.php?t=880

*Looks at the picture in the link. Intense zoom in on face, eyes are squinted for no reason*

Found it!


;) A cookie goes to whoever figures out the reference I just made.

Sounds almost like Fry.... or at least, that image macro of him squinting with the text:  I see what you did there.


Of course, I could be horribly wrong, but meh...   xD



Oh and someone (Duce) told me I should ask that someone add Final Fantasy IV and V to Nyou Fiction as a category....



FallenStar

You're close, it is a show that plays on Adultswim, but it's not Futurama....

It's one of the more 'wtf?!' shows they have.

Well.... at least I had the right channel...  and the right block...   *nervous laugh*



FallenStar

Some ideas I had...

1. The story of how a male character first learned/witnessed how females pee.

2. The story of a bladder desperation problem ultimately solved by the powers (magical, telekinetic etc.) of the chosen character.

3. Any story involving embarrassment over bedwetting.

4. Any story involving peeing and a slumber party.

As far as peeing contests go, FFVIII and FFXII seem to be some of the most under-represented games, so anything involving characters from both of those would make me jump for joy (Selphie is my favorite, followed by Quistis and then Rinoa).

Also, I'd just like to say that there can never be too much Fran. It's been proven by science.However, I wouldn't mind seeing Ashe or Penelo get a turn, too...

Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on September 14, 2007, 01:59:28 AM
Some ideas I had...

1. The story of how a male character first learned/witnessed how females pee.

2. The story of a bladder desperation problem ultimately solved by the powers (magical, telekinetic etc.) of the chosen character.

4. Any story involving embarrassment over bedwetting.

3. Any story involving peeing and a slumber party.

I like three. Or Four.

Of course, if the theme ends up being one of those two I'll probably combine them for my entry. Embarassing accidential bedwetting at a slumber party? The idea is golden (Cheesy pun intended).

I thought a slumber party would be a good way to allow holding and wetting contests while also leaving room for other stories.  That way we can accomodate more writers' interests and get more entries than last time.

On the other hand, I would personally prefer a less generic challenge.

I definitely don't think we should confine it to one fictional universe.  We want everyone here to be able to write about the characters they're passionate about, don't we?

Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on September 15, 2007, 12:30:34 AM
I thought a slumber party would be a good way to allow holding and wetting contests while also leaving room for other stories.  That way we can accomodate more writers' interests and get more entries than last time.

On the other hand, I would personally prefer a less generic challenge.

I definitely don't think we should confine it to one fictional universe.  We want everyone here to be able to write about the characters they're passionate about, don't we?

I think a slumber party theme is pretty generic. I mean, there's a lot you can do with that setting. An innocent peeing scene starring a timid, bladder shy girl who is bothered by the idea of peeing. There's accidential wetting or induced wetting (bed or otherwise), contest style plots... I think the idea is pretty open.

I think there's a lot one could do with a contest, too. Maybe not limit it to a type of contest, though, just a pee related contest of some sort.

I agree that the more universes that are allowed by the rules the better (I personally prefer no rules on the universe). But, and I mean no offense to anyone, I really don't like the idea of limiting us to particular characters. No, not even if the character is Yuna ( God, I can't believe I said that  :o )

But, whatever. I'm sure I'll be able to put something together regardless of what is decided.

On a side note, if we go with Jimmy's second idea I could just use a "re-mastered" version of Bend This! and call 'er good :).

I like the "accidental wetting" being "induced" by a not-so-shy best friend, but... eh..  xP



BTW, Poowrite, you ever thought of about doing an older Final Fantasy desperation/pee fic?  Like maybe, starring Rydia and Rosa or Rydia OR Rosa or even Celes/Terra/Relm?


Meh, you prolly don't even go that far back...   I did, though... I did a Rydia one... and I've got a Celes one that I haven't uploaded yet... I was gonna, but the FFVI section hadn't been made at the time and I forgot afterwards...  x_x



FallenStar

Quote from: FallenStar on September 15, 2007, 02:23:46 AM
I like the "accidental wetting" being "induced" by a not-so-shy best friend, but... eh..  xP



BTW, Poowrite, you ever thought of about doing an older Final Fantasy desperation/pee fic?  Like maybe, starring Rydia and Rosa or Rydia OR Rosa or even Celes/Terra/Relm?


Meh, you prolly don't even go that far back...   I did, though... I did a Rydia one... and I've got a Celes one that I haven't uploaded yet... I was gonna, but the FFVI section hadn't been made at the time and I forgot afterwards...  x_x

FallenStar

I've though about using Rydia, but the last time I played FFIV I thought it was the second game in the series. I'd actually like to do a Final Fantasy stroy set in FFXI. A Mithra in a potty situation? {Can I have it} {Please}

Anyway, I didn't really get into RPGs until Wild ARMS on the PS1. Then FFVII. I made it a point to go back and play those that came before, though I only ever beat the first one. I got to the end of 4 and 5 and probably about half way through 3 and 6. I was working on 2 recently, but then Heavenly Sword came out.

If it's FF and originally came out on a Sony platform, I've beat it, except for the spin-offs(X-2 and that ghastly shooter) and FFXI.

ok a poll is been added.

How do I see the poll results?  ???

I think I will sit this one, not only because I'm more of a scat guy, I'm starting to think it might be bad if I go for this one. I'm not saying I think I'll win hands down, but it's amazing that I've twice already (and may possibly win the second contest if we have the chance to finish it).

Heheheh, actually makes me think that if someone wins at least three times in a row, they should maybe sit out one contest :P

Can't wait to see what the theme is and the stories that will be made for them.  ;D

Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on September 19, 2007, 11:56:07 PM
How do I see the poll results?  ???

you have to vote first, but as of right now theres no votes.

now there's a vote ^_^

I can't decide right now.  It's a tossup between 4 of the options.  :-\

I would be most..... DISpleased if the contest wasn't a holding pee contest-type... 'cause I've got a nice fanfic that I haven't posted yet on this new Nyou..... Yes, that's riiiight!  it's "The Contest" and it would be a great competitor, but unless you peeps actually vote for a "holding contest", I can't post it...   :p




FallenStar

Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on September 20, 2007, 12:56:08 AM
I can't decide right now.  It's a tossup between 4 of the options.  :-\

When I'm placed in a situation where I have to make a tough choice, I like to flip a coin :).

Quote from: OrpheumZero on September 19, 2007, 11:59:43 PM
I think I will sit this one, not only because I'm more of a scat guy, I'm starting to think it might be bad if I go for this one. I'm not saying I think I'll win hands down, but it's amazing that I've twice already (and may possibly win the second contest if we have the chance to finish it).

Heheheh, actually makes me think that if someone wins at least three times in a row, they should maybe sit out one contest :P

Can't wait to see what the theme is and the stories that will be made for them.  ;D

:-\ It won't be the same having a contest w/o you, Orpheum. Oh well, hopefully you'll compete in the next one.

Quote from: FallenStar on September 20, 2007, 01:09:57 PM
I would be most..... DISpleased if the contest wasn't a holding pee contest-type... 'cause I've got a nice fanfic that I haven't posted yet on this new Nyou..... Yes, that's riiiight!  it's "The Contest" and it would be a great competitor, but unless you peeps actually vote for a "holding contest", I can't post it...   :p

FallenStar

just because there's no contest theme about it doesn't mean you can't post it

Quote from: Anime Lover on September 20, 2007, 01:20:56 PM

just because there's no contest theme about it doesn't mean you can't post it

Yeah, but... but.... but....    I wanna be in a contest!   :'(



FallenStar

hey, I wonder if it would be possible that for contests, a person could include one of their already posted fics.

Say i do the slumber party option and post it before it wins, could I go edit my fic to be included in the contest?

I can't imagine any reason why not.

Quote from: FallenStar on September 20, 2007, 01:09:57 PM
I would be most..... DISpleased if the contest wasn't a holding pee contest-type... 'cause I've got a nice fanfic that I haven't posted yet on this new Nyou..... Yes, that's riiiight!  it's "The Contest" and it would be a great competitor, but unless you peeps actually vote for a "holding contest", I can't post it...   :p




FallenStar

I've got an idea for either contest or slumber party, so if either of those win I'll be happy. The contest idea would take a lot more work on my part, I think, but in the end might be more interesting to read/write.

Anyway, hopefully one of those two will win because otherwise it's back to the drawing board :).

Quote from: Poowrite on September 20, 2007, 01:15:05 PM

Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on September 20, 2007, 12:56:08 AM
I can't decide right now.  It's a tossup between 4 of the options.  :-\

When I'm placed in a situation where I have to make a tough choice, I like to flip a coin :).

This is why I wanted to be able to see the votes so far before I vote.  If 1 or more of the options I like were way behind and obviously wouldn't win I could rule them out.  It would make the decision easier.

By the way when does the poll close?

Hehehe, I guess no one could find out the reference I was making.

It's from Perfect Hair Forever. "Found it" is the phrase a fat Japanese tv director says.

Perfect Hair Forever? Is that the name of a show?

I don't watch Adult Swim much anymore. I've seen most of their Futurama and most of their Family Guy. If they'd ever start airing Korgoth of Barbaria then I'd start watching again, but until then just a bunch a' shows I've either seen or don't like  ::)

Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on September 21, 2007, 01:46:47 AM

Quote from: Poowrite on September 20, 2007, 01:15:05 PM

Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on September 20, 2007, 12:56:08 AM
I can't decide right now.  It's a tossup between 4 of the options.  :-\

When I'm placed in a situation where I have to make a tough choice, I like to flip a coin :).

This is why I wanted to be able to see the votes so far before I vote.  If 1 or more of the options I like were way behind and obviously wouldn't win I could rule them out.  It would make the decision easier.

By the way when does the poll close?

Looks like the 30th. So, what happens if we end up with a tie?

And what in the blue hell is an Altaiarean Beverage? Just in case it wins.

Altaiarean Beverage is a creation of mine.


Basically, it's a super-concentrated diuretic that has the unique ability to change its taste to perfectly imitate that of the drinker's favorite drink.


A 12 oz amount of this is enough to force any girl to be so full that she starts peeing, regardless of her strength, in about 20-30 minutes.


Naturally, the lower the dosage, the longer it takes to fill a girl up, and vice versa - the higher the dosage, the quicker it'll take.



FallenStar

It looks like the software has been tweaked to allow us to see the results without voting.  I thank whoever did this.  :)

I was going to wait until right before closing to vote, but I changed my mind and voted for the magical desperation one.

Random question: where does the name "Altaiarean" come from?

There are two answers for that.

1. The answer I would give is that, I was inspired by Star Trek.  There is a type of whiskey, which Picard gave to Guinan and that he later shared with Montgomery Scott.  I can't spell the actual name but it sounds pretty close to Aldeberaian or something, and it was the inspiration for my calling this "super diuretic that tastes like [insert X female's name here]'s favorite drink".


2. The answer that Suki, Sashi, Nanyo, Mizu (or any other Ap Dat/Mem'lo would give):  Altaiarean Beverage was created by an Ap Dat man centuries ago named Altaiar. He was such an important man that he led the Ap Dat Empire in a peaceful, wonderful period in history and when it was time for him to die, to leave the mortal realm, he was taken to the Ethereal Realm and chose to use his new found powers to watch over his people as much as he could, though he could never directly interfere.  He is, as best there can be, a God of the Ap Dat people and one of the few who is immune to Hon'tyl's Pleasure-Inducing powers.


Granted, the answer Suki would give you is strictly and only found in my RPs with the Ap Dat people (the only written record, of which, is the RP2Fic series, season 1 - by the time of Season 2, Hon'tyl's mortal form (though her spirit is immortal) had been destroyed and neither AL or I focused on her anymore.)



FallenStar

I think you're mixing 2 alien drinks together.  Altairian brandy is the blue beverage in the episode Manhunt.  Aldebaran whiskey is the green beverage in the episode Relics.  They're references to the real stars Altair and Aldebaran.

If I did, it was purely coincidental.


I don't remember seeing the episode "Manhunt", so I was just going off the Aldebaran whiskey...   xD


FallenStar

Okay, I thought there was a connection since "Altaiarean" is so close to "Altairian." 

Manhunt is the episode where Counselor Troi's mother is horny because of some sci-fi plot device.  Mick Fleetwood from the band Fleetwood Mac guest stars, but you can't really tell it's him because he's under alien fish makeup.

I like the last one the best, though I'm not much of a peeing only fan. There's just something about it when a boy (or girl) witnesses a girl going to the bathroom. It's like a deep, dark secret that girls pee and poop because it's considered so "taboo", so when they are being watched, whether they know or not, makes it seem like their "secret" is exposed. I don't really know how to explain it any other way.

Crazy, huh?  :D

Quote from: Aluru on September 28, 2007, 05:04:48 AM
I like the last one the best, though I'm not much of a peeing only fan. There's just something about it when a boy (or girl) witnesses a girl going to the bathroom. It's like a deep, dark secret that girls pee and poop because it's considered so "taboo", so when they are being watched, whether they know or not, makes it seem like their "secret" is exposed. I don't really know how to explain it any other way.

Crazy, huh?  :D

Not crazy at all. Now, if you could just put on this white sleeveless jacket and make yourself comfortable in this padded room some one will be along shortly with your pills.

;D

Seriously, though, looks like magical desperation has a solid lead so I wanna clear something up: does it have to be a desperation situation solved by magik or <insert special power here>? I'm nursing a few ideas, one inparticular, but it features the main character dealing with the consquences of wetting herself with her powers. And no, it's not a Bend This! re-write ^^.

I'm just curious.... Who put up the Altaiarean Beverage option on the poll?


If that was Duce, then I need to have a little convo with him.  Obviously, he doesn't understand that no one here would know anything about it...  >_>;



FallenStar

Quote from: FallenStar on September 28, 2007, 09:32:17 PM
I'm just curious.... Who put up the Altaiarean Beverage option on the poll?


If that was Duce, then I need to have a little convo with him.  Obviously, he doesn't understand that no one here would know anything about it...  >_>;



FallenStar

I felt a little akward asking what it was.

Like, I was afraid it was something that I should know about but didn't :).

Yeah I put that option there, but only cause you (FallenStar) suggested it.

Quote from: Poowrite on September 28, 2007, 06:17:00 PM
Seriously, though, looks like magical desperation has a solid lead so I wanna clear something up: does it have to be a desperation situation solved by magik or <insert special power here>? I'm nursing a few ideas, one inparticular, but it features the main character dealing with the consquences of wetting herself with her powers. And no, it's not a Bend This! re-write ^^.

Disregard this question. I have a better idea that fits the bill :).

Quote from: Duce on September 30, 2007, 02:52:44 AM
Yeah I put that option there, but only cause you (FallenStar) suggested it.

Me so stupid.  x_x


BTW, Duce, could you change the smileys?  The ones you got up here are as bad as those AIM smileys I dislike so much....   =/



FallenStar

Aluru: Interesting.  I'd never heard a girl's perspective on this before.

Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on October 01, 2007, 10:24:30 PM
Aluru: Interesting.  I'd never heard a girl's perspective on this before.

??? Girl? ???
*recalls own post* Oh, you must be speaking of the part where I said "(or girl)". The whole "secret" thing was only supposed to be when a boy sees a girl going to the bathroom. Of course it's not a secret between girls! :P :D

I only meant that it makes it much better when a girl is being watched by either a boy or girl, or both. It's like..... a bomb exploding isn't as exciting if there's no one around to see it. Kinda like that in a sense.