So, me and Orpheum have managed so far 4 chapters of toilet molesting, and I've been thinking the series deserves a pic to go along.
I's like to hear what people would like to see in that pic, be it a scene from one of the chapters or something else entirely, like perhaps a pic that could do as the front page of a book containing Sakura's tales of huge dumps 8)
Orpheum, you got anything in mind for this brainchild of yours?
So, let the creativity flow!
How about when she was buddy dumping with Chun-Li? It would be great to see two amazing girls clogging the potty and the expression of their faces must be priceless!
Or maybe from when Sakura destroyed the toilet of the perverted janitor at her school? ;)
If you want to do something a little artsy, you could have a 3-picture composition. The pic on the left would be a bird's eye view of a toilet, the pic in the middle would be of Sakura with a mischievous grin, and the pic on the right would be a bird's eye view of the same toilet after it's been hopelessly clogged by Sakura. Then somewhere would be the words "Sakura" and "The Queen of Clogs." ^-^
If you're art pal is up for it, he could do a 6 panel or more mini comic that more or less sums up the story of "Choke on this!" That'd be cool, and here's how it could play out.
Panel 1: Sakura is holding her distended belly, a young proud woman pregnant with poo. :P
Panel 2: The pervert Toshi is caught spying on the buxom martial artist.
Panel 3: Poor Sakura slips and falls on her bouncy booty trying to chase the sleeze ball perv.
Panel 4: Our spunky little heroine finds the janitor's keys and plans to give him a 'present'. ;)
Panel 5: It's Armeggedon! No-wait, it's Sakura taking an epic dump... wait is that really different? ???
Panel 6: Toshi is reading the 'giftcard' left by Sakura, standing by a toilet utterly clogged by shit.
While not a final idea, it's certainly an excellent springboard if I do say so myself. If only Malachi were availible for requests, it'd be awesome to see him turn the whole series into a doujin.
Actually, I believe Malachi does requests, he said so somewhere I recall.
Quote from: yarr on May 19, 2009, 04:39:11 AM
Actually, I believe Malachi does requests, he said so somewhere I recall.
Oh he did? That's cool. Once we finish the Sakura series, we should see if he be willing to turn it into a doujin. :005: Just imagine, an entire book dedicated to Sakura's rump pumping out big cables.... *Nosebleed*
I just did a revision to part 3, adding another 'remake' of the chapter. This should satisfy those fools who dared questioned my logic about Chun-Li and Sakura pooping together!
I'm still not satisfied! >:(
The real reason is off course that I want to read much more about Chun Li and Sakura buddy dumping together 8)
Well you're on the internet, right? Then make a story about that yourself! :P :P :P
I'm glad you thought to rewrite this one more time Orpheum. This is my favorite version so far.
Having them be a little more reluctant to enter in this arrangement and Sakura using the tub makes more sense. I don't know if "realistic" is quite the word, but this is more believable to me and I can really get into it for the first time. Still, the twin toilets idea is a wonderful mental image :004: and I'm glad you added the other versions as chapters instead of deleting the old ones.
Yarr, I'm all for more Chun Li and Sakura buddy dumping. ;D I'd love to see them demolish a few stalls in a public restroom together and maybe even get Cammy involved. ;)
Well the series hasn't really been entirely set in stone, so there's still plenty of room for more adventures with Sakura. Heck, if you can think of a good scenario for Cammy to come into play with, I'm all ears.
Maybe Cammy has been posted on guard duty to protect the restrooms of a public building from the toilet-destroyer who's been wreaking havoc around town. Sakura happens to be there when her intestinal timebomb is about to hit zero, and is denied access to the restroom. But Chun-Li is around to violently defend her friend's right to use the public convenience.
Okay, that's ridiculous, but it could be fun! ;D
Nah, that'd be a bit too far fetched ( ^-^ <--- oblivious to the irony of that statement) but I'm sure we can come up with a good idea for Cammy's bouncy booty to enter the story, heck, maybe even just have her appear in a one-off chapter where we learn that a certain special agent doesn't need 'gadgets' to wreak havoc. :P
I also feel that we should get Karin to appear somehow, given how she's supposed to be Sakura's rival. While I haven't gotten Super Street Fighter IV yet, I've seen pictures of Mokoto, and she seems like she could be a cute pooper.... ( ^-^ <---Again, forgetting the irony).
Hope Yar has been at least feeding ideas into the next installment of Sakura's odorous misadventures :-[
Karin seems like she'd be a prude when it comes to bathroom issues. I think you should write something playing off of that.
Of course my greatest dream is still to read about Sakura's colon defeating a bedpan. ;D
Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on May 31, 2010, 12:13:47 AM
Of course my greatest dream is still to read about Sakura's colon defeating a bedpan. ;D
Well as far as I can recall, Yar is supposed to be working on Sakura's epic battle at the hospital (more like toilet based terrorist strike, :P)
I got a lot of things going on in life at the moment, so I barely have any time to write anymore in the foreseable future.
Still, when it arrives, part 6 will not be as peaceful and serene as this rather hidden and discreet toilet clogging incident:
(http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/8445/sakurafarts2.jpg)
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HEADLINE: BROWN "BABY" FOUND LODGED IN WOMEN'S TOILET. :P
Like w wind, she comes, dropping trou and choking toilets.
A bit of bad news, dear readers. Yarr has announced his resignment from the "S.A.S (Sakura's Ass Stoppers)" (Ok I made that commitee up, sue me :P). It is with heavy heart that we must see him go, but Yarr still promises to be a *somewhat* active member of the community, but feels that his current performance is ill fitted for carrying on his duties (heheheh... duty... :009:)
Anyway... while this will likely postpone the next installment of Sakura's clogging adventures for a time. I have decided that in the spirit of the series, a successor is needed. I would ask that Sharkbait, if you'd kindly, might consider taking up the mantle of helping in continuing the ever-exciting adventures of Sakura's rump with me. Of course, I'm open to any and all potential takers, I may even allow for more than just one newblood to join in. Just keep in mind, you need to think big, because Sakura sure makes big ;D.
I can think of a few different plots to suggest for Sakura and her prodigious colon, but I don't see myself writing a whole chapter.
Fear not, proud forumgoers! I have accepted the bold request, and have become your brave new champion!
*Trumpet noise*
...Or not. Anyway yeah, I'll be picking up where Yarr left off, after catching up on the series (I remember reading two of the parts before, but I need to fill in the gaps.) And comments or suggestions would be much appreciated. Let's consider this an experiment for now.
A successor!
(http://www.sfwu.org.nz/images/golden%20toilet%20brush%20awards.bmp)
I wish you luck conveying the tales of the toilet killer, key remembrances is "think big" and then "think bigger".
Edit: relevant http://www.mediafire.com/?ch5ieg7mj76qe2e (toilet clogging dumps)
Glad to see you're definately on board for this. And course, I'm sure Yarr won't mind at least playing the role of a consultant, offering sage advice (and perhaps a sage spray for those really nasty smells Sakura will be leaving behind). And as I said before, if anyone else is interested (and I mean really willing to help out) they're welcome to joining as collaborators for the series as well.
Just in case you could use some inspiration, I'll post a few ideas I had.
1. Sakura is constipated. Someone who learns of this (and may be slightly insane) is determined to give her an enema for her own good. They end up going to great lengths to "help" the reluctant girl.
2. Since public toilets have been "vandalized" by Sakura, a (female) security guard won't let her enter one, and they fight. In a bit of poetic justice, the toilet defender has an accident when she's knocked unconscious.
3. Sakura's bowels are so superhuman that scientists want to study her. She'll collect money if she consents to some very intimate research into the workings of her digestive system. At first she says "no, you dirty old men." But when she'd IDed as the toilet vandal and forced to pay hefty fines for her hefty loads, she realizes she needs that money.
4. Sakura is on board a plane, and lets off a fart so loud it sounds like an explosion. That, combined with someone overhearing her talking about feeling ready to explode, lead the authorities to think she's carrying a bomb. She is strip-searched, making her dump her "carry-on luggage."
Shame to think this series has fellen by the wayside. Though Anime Lover's story was a nice sort of "lost episode". Hopefully something can be figured out soon.