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Quote from: OrpheumZero on October 08, 2007, 09:17:43 PM
Since it would kinda get a bit dumb to switch between one fetish or another for each contest. I thought maybe we could do this:

Everyone presents an original story (their own characters, worlds, etc) then the winning story becomes the focus of the next contest where everyone writes a continuation/sequel for whoevers story won the previous.

So like say Poowrite does a fantasy/thriller and it wins, contest VI has everyone doing a follow-up to his.

That would be a neat way to flow right into the next contest and spice up new things, but we could also still use an existing series if everyone preffered that (kinda like my Code Lyoko fic and the spin-offs by PW and AL).

After that, I would say contest VII be something new. (Though I think maybe we could all do a Final Fantasy VII theme for that one :P)

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Quote from: Nia on October 15, 2007, 12:41:18 AM
I think a good theme might be:

a young girl and guy (like a friend, or a crush, or a classmate, or maybe even a brother, some other guy) some how end up in each others bodies, and the girl needed to take a big dump before hand, ( or she was constipated, or was a side effect of switching bodies or what ever the reason.) so the guy has to take a dump in a girls body  before they can get their bodies, (for any reason, like just couldn't hold it , or had to be able to switch back or what ever.) but not in panties/clothes.

so basically: guy switches bodies with young girl, and has to take a dump not in panties/clothes.

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Quote from: Poowrite on October 15, 2007, 01:35:53 PM
I guess I'll toss an idea out there: a bathroom related story set in a universe that doesn't yet have any stories posted under it. So, Final Fantasy V would be a canidate but not any of the FF games. The category doesn't have to be posted yet (so something like Wild ARMS, Grandia or Disgaea 2) and it can be an original universe, as long as it hasn't been used before, so I couldn't use Kameyo's universe. Also, if there is a story under that universe that hasn't been posted yet, that universe is free game (so even though Omnipresent did the Bleach stories, it'd be okay to use that universe since those stories aren't posted here.)

Finally, if two authors decided to use the same universe for their entry, that's okay. For example, if Orpheum and I both did an Eva story for the contest that would be acceptable. This applies to any non-contest entries posted after the contest begins.

If we're going to do peeing again, the contest and slumber party ideas should be options for this poll, since they were both pretty popular last time.

Yeah, I'd still want a peeing contest.... I've got two stories that would fit that theme.   >.>



FallenStar

I just thought of something.  Me and Poowrite have both started writing "rescue the princess" stories (i.e. a kidnapped damsel who can't go to the pot because she's shackled or tied up wets and/or messes herself before the hero rescues her).  It might be fun if we make that a contest.  There are certainly enough princess-hero combinations in the fictional universes we love to give writers lots of options.

Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on October 05, 2007, 03:41:03 AM
I just thought of something.  Me and Poowrite have both started writing "rescue the princess" stories (i.e. a kidnapped damsel who can't go to the pot because she's shackled or tied up wets and/or messes herself before the hero rescues her).  It might be fun if we make that a contest.  There are certainly enough princess-hero combinations in the fictional universes we love to give writers lots of options.

That doesn't sound like a bad idea. Maybe to make everyone happy and keep things fair, 2 winners could be decided at the end. One for the best panty-peeing story, and one for the best panty-pooping story.

Since it would kinda get a bit dumb to switch between one fetish or another for each contest. I thought maybe we could do this:

Everyone presents an original story (their own characters, worlds, etc) then the winning story becomes the focus of the next contest where everyone writes a continuation/sequel for whoevers story won the previous.

So like say Poowrite does a fantasy/thriller and it wins, contest VI has everyone doing a follow-up to his.

That would be a neat way to flow right into the next contest and spice up new things, but we could also still use an existing series if everyone preffered that (kinda like my Code Lyoko fic and the spin-offs by PW and AL).

After that, I would say contest VII be something new. (Though I think maybe we could all do a Final Fantasy VII theme for that one :P)

Quote from: OrpheumZero on October 08, 2007, 09:17:43 PM
Everyone presents an original story (their own characters, worlds, etc) then the winning story becomes the focus of the next contest where everyone writes a continuation/sequel for whoevers story won the previous.

I don't like this idea.  I think it would be too constraining for a contest.

I like the idea, it's different and interesting ^_^

Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on October 09, 2007, 12:35:19 AM

Quote from: OrpheumZero on October 08, 2007, 09:17:43 PM
Everyone presents an original story (their own characters, worlds, etc) then the winning story becomes the focus of the next contest where everyone writes a continuation/sequel for whoevers story won the previous.

I don't like this idea.  I think it would be too constraining for a contest.

Not really, whoever writes the winning story won't lose anything they established. Meaning that if you made the female character to look like this or that, everyone still has to keep the designs and personality intact. Like I said, if no one is interested in the Original series angle, then we'll just use a pre-existing one and go with that. But I think it could work out quite well and be something more out of the ordinary than just 'girl has to *insert conflict* and then *insert results*' theme that is basically what all the contest normally are, just with certain limits/rules.

Quote from: OrpheumZero on October 09, 2007, 02:41:25 AMMeaning that if you made the female character to look like this or that, everyone still has to keep the designs and personality intact.

That's exactly why I think it would be too constraining for the authors.

Wait a minute now...


I don't want just ANYONE controlling my female characters....  >.>


(other than AL, who I'd love to see another Kim X Suki fic from *cough cough hint hint*  >.>)



Besides, how can we be reasonably sure that other people could keep our characters intact without losing some of the flavor of the character, herself?



FallenStar

Quote from: FallenStar on October 09, 2007, 03:22:24 AMBesides, how can we be reasonably sure that other people could keep our characters intact without losing some of the flavor of the character, herself?

I'd imagine that would be part of the appeal, I don't think anyone could make a perfect match of the way the originator of the character would have them act and react, but, at least IMO, it would be amusing and interesting to see exactly how well a 2nd person could do.

Like quite awhile ago, someone requested to use my characters, Lynn, Alex and Suzan in a series of fics, they were'nt a perfect representation of the way I'd have them react, but it was pretty darn close and I really enjoyed reading about my characters when it wasn't me who did the fic. I'm still waiting on that guy to continue >.<

We can save that for the site story.

Quote from: Anime Lover on October 09, 2007, 04:11:12 AM


I'd imagine that would be part of the appeal, I don't think anyone could make a perfect match of the way the originator of the character would have them act and react, but, at least IMO, it would be amusing and interesting to see exactly how well a 2nd person could do. 

Y'mean like how I totally eff'ed up Kim's character in my attempt to write one with those two?  >.>


Yeah, I can see where YOU'd think it was amusing and interesting...  xD


Although... I still wouldn't mind seeing you do another Kim + Suki fic. After all, the one you did do was pretty good.

QuoteLike quite awhile ago, someone requested to use my characters, Lynn, Alex and Suzan in a series of fics, they were'nt a perfect representation of the way I'd have them react, but it was pretty darn close and I really enjoyed reading about my characters when it wasn't me who did the fic. I'm still waiting on that guy to continue >.<

Except for the fact that I'm sure they wanted to do scat/poop or something else I wouldn't like, I'd prolly wanna read it.  I love Lynn as a character... She rules.  And, I like the idea of a first timer/one timer (like how I made Suki and how you once did Sarah... that fic was KICKASS at that point...)


FallenStar

By pre-existing I meant an anime, manga, game series that already existed. If we did go with original, it'd have to be completely new, meaning no original characters you already had made. But I really don't think it'd be that hard to keep up with someone's established character. You just need to make sure you don't make them say something they wouldn't or do the opposite of their standards/morals.

But I really think this should be the next theme, it's really different and would only work best as a theme, it wouldn't be the same if it were the site story.

I'm just saying we should give it a shot, we've all got some great talent, let's try something new.

Quote from: FallenStar on October 10, 2007, 01:24:32 AMExcept for the fact that I'm sure they wanted to do scat/poop or something else I wouldn't like, I'd prolly wanna read it.  I love Lynn as a character... She rules.

There's no scat or anything like that.
Actually, the author does past version of Lynn where she first discovers her succubus blood. and almost kills a friend. So in regards to Lynn, it's an unofficial backstory, Lynn and her mom arn't main characters though, the fics are told in the 1st person POV. it's not until the fifth chapter, (which is unfinished) were the current, seventeen year old Lynn is present and Alex is introduced.

Quote from: OrpheumZero on October 10, 2007, 01:51:54 AMBut I really think this should be the next theme, it's really different and would only work best as a theme, it wouldn't be the same if it were the site story.

On that note, how come discussion of the site story suddenly halted?  This puzzles me.  ???

On the subject of using other people's characters, I can go either way.  Some characters and universes I make are sacred to me, and I wouldn't want anyone else writing them (at least not without considerable input from me).  Others I wouldn't mind giving other authors free reign on.  But the bottom line is that I don't think this should be a contest theme.  It's too constraining for the people who are going to continue with the stories/characters, and it bothers at least some of the original authors.  The support for this is going to be low, and the turnout for it if it gets picked will be low.  Besides, the people who are into this idea can continue with other people's stories/characters at any time without it being a contest (provided they have permission).

I hate being negative to people on this forum, since you're all so polite and open-minded, but this is one thing I strongly feel is a bad idea.

changing place of residence: this is why I've clammed up in the site story discussion. I should be able to contribute again, though.

I'm just throwin' this out there, but shouldn't we be focusing more on Contest IV? I'm not the only one who intends to enter am I?

I have an idea for Contest IV, but I haven't had the time to write it yet.  I hope we get several entries, but I'm kind of concerned that the month is 1/3 over and there are no entries yet.

Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on October 10, 2007, 06:05:16 PMThe support for this is going to be low, and the turnout for it if it gets picked will be low.

It's not like there are many ppl who participate in the story contests anyway, Only three ppl have, including me.

BTW, 2 ppl are for this idea and 2 ppl are against it,
1. One doesn't want others using his characters
2. the other thinks it would be too constricting

IMO 1. Don't participate then

IMO 2. How do you know it would be too constricting? If the characters of the fic to be follow-up on are described well, it should be easy to make an 'unoffical' follow up. and if you having trouble, what's wrong with actually asking the original author if having a character do something is alright?

I'll do a story like this, if AL consents to doing the follow up to my story..  xP



FallenStar

Quote from: FallenStar on October 10, 2007, 11:02:04 PM
I'll do a story like this, if AL consents to doing the follow up to my story..  xP

If I'm the only reason you'd make a fic, you shouldn't participate.

I don't think I'm going to change your mind, so I think I'll just leave this matter be.  Everybody can vote on it vs. the other themes, like in the last contest.

Quote from: Anime Lover on October 10, 2007, 11:03:56 PM

If I'm the only reason you'd make a fic, you shouldn't participate.

I see trying to use humor around you is a no-win scenario...  >_>;


FallenStar

I think a good theme might be:


a young girl and guy (like a friend, or a crush, or a classmate, or maybe even a brother, some other guy) some how end up in each others bodies, and the girl needed to take a big dump before hand, ( or she was constipated, or was a side effect of switching bodies or what ever the reason.) so the guy has to take a dump in a girls body  before they can get their bodies, (for any reason, like just couldn't hold it , or had to be able to switch back or what ever.) but not in panties/clothes.

so basically: guy switches bodies with young girl, and has to take a dump not in panties/clothes.

Quote from: Nia on October 15, 2007, 12:41:18 AM
I think a good theme might be:


a young girl and guy (like a friend, or a crush, or a classmate, or maybe even a brother, some other guy) some how end up in each others bodies, and the girl needed to take a big dump before hand, ( or she was constipated, or was a side effect of switching bodies or what ever the reason.) so the guy has to take a dump in a girls body  before they can get their bodies, (for any reason, like just couldn't hold it , or had to be able to switch back or what ever.) but not in panties/clothes.

so basically: guy switches bodies with young girl, and has to take a dump not in panties/clothes.

That's a good challenge, but I think we need something broader for a contest theme.

Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on October 15, 2007, 12:55:48 AM

Quote from: Nia on October 15, 2007, 12:41:18 AM
I think a good theme might be:


a young girl and guy (like a friend, or a crush, or a classmate, or maybe even a brother, some other guy) some how end up in each others bodies, and the girl needed to take a big dump before hand, ( or she was constipated, or was a side effect of switching bodies or what ever the reason.) so the guy has to take a dump in a girls body  before they can get their bodies, (for any reason, like just couldn't hold it , or had to be able to switch back or what ever.) but not in panties/clothes.

so basically: guy switches bodies with young girl, and has to take a dump not in panties/clothes.

That's a good challenge, but I think we need something broader for a contest theme.

I don't know, I think a body switching theme could make a good contest. Personally, I'd really rather drop the "not in panties/clothes" stipulation but aside from that I don't see a problem with it. In fact, do that and I'd really like it.

I guess I'll toss an idea out there: a bathroom related story set in a universe that doesn't yet have any stories posted under it. So, Final Fantasy V would be a canidate but not any of the FF games. The category doesn't have to be posted yet (so something like Wild ARMS, Grandia or Disgaea 2) and it can be an original universe, as long as it hasn't been used before, so I couldn't use Kameyo's universe. Also, if there is a story under that universe that hasn't been posted yet, that universe is free game (so even though Omnipresent did the Bleach stories, it'd be okay to use that universe since those stories aren't posted here.)

Finally, if two authors decided to use the same universe for their entry, that's okay. For example, if Orpheum and I both did an Eva story for the contest that would be acceptable. This applies to any non-contest entries posted after the contest begins.

If we ever did a contest that specifically told us to use a certain category, I wouldn't mind putting up a pee-desperation fic from Final Fantasy V...  >.>




FallenStar

Quote from: Poowrite on October 15, 2007, 01:35:53 PM

Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on October 15, 2007, 12:55:48 AM

Quote from: Nia on October 15, 2007, 12:41:18 AM
I think a good theme might be:


a young girl and guy (like a friend, or a crush, or a classmate, or maybe even a brother, some other guy) some how end up in each others bodies, and the girl needed to take a big dump before hand, ( or she was constipated, or was a side effect of switching bodies or what ever the reason.) so the guy has to take a dump in a girls body  before they can get their bodies, (for any reason, like just couldn't hold it , or had to be able to switch back or what ever.) but not in panties/clothes.

so basically: guy switches bodies with young girl, and has to take a dump not in panties/clothes.

That's a good challenge, but I think we need something broader for a contest theme.

I don't know, I think a body switching theme could make a good contest.

I wasn't opposing a body-swap story in general, I just think there are too many details in Nia's idea.  Contest themes should be general ideas without too many dos and don'ts.

Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on October 15, 2007, 06:43:35 PM
I wasn't opposing a body-swap story in general, I just think there are too many details in Nia's idea.  Contest themes should be general ideas without too many dos and don'ts.

Right, I was trying to think of a way to articulate what you just said in my last post, but failed miserably.

If we limit the cirmstances in which the swap occurs and in which it can be reversed it'll make it tougher to make one story really original from another, I believe.

Okay our Contest V options so far are...

1. Peeing contest
2. Peeing + slumber party
3. Potty problems of imprisoned/bound princess awaiting rescue
4. Body swap
5. Set in previously unused universe

Am I leaving anything out?

Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on October 15, 2007, 07:46:55 PM
Okay our Contest V options so far are...

1. Peeing contest
2. Peeing + slumber party
3. Potty problems of imprisoned/bound princess awaiting rescue
4. Body swap
5. Set in previously unused universe

Am I leaving anything out?

yeah...

Quote from: OrpheumZero on October 08, 2007, 09:17:43 PM
Since it would kinda get a bit dumb to switch between one fetish or another for each contest. I thought maybe we could do this:

Everyone presents an original story (their own characters, worlds, etc) then the winning story becomes the focus of the next contest where everyone writes a continuation/sequel for whoevers story won the previous.

So like say Poowrite does a fantasy/thriller and it wins, contest VI has everyone doing a follow-up to his.

That would be a neat way to flow right into the next contest and spice up new things, but we could also still use an existing series if everyone preffered that (kinda like my Code Lyoko fic and the spin-offs by PW and AL).

After that, I would say contest VII be something new. (Though I think maybe we could all do a Final Fantasy VII theme for that one :P)

But that would be for contest VI, wouldn't it?

no, with OrpheumZero's suggestion contest VI would be the follow up, so it goes like this:

cont V= beginning fic
cont VI= follow up to the winning beginning fic

Okay so the only stipulation for V would be that it had to be an original universe?

Quote from: OrpheumZero on October 08, 2007, 09:17:43 PM
Like I said, if no one is interested in the Original series angle, then we'll just use a pre-existing one and go with that.

Quote from: Poowrite on October 15, 2007, 01:35:53 PM

I don't know, I think a body switching theme could make a good contest. Personally, I'd really rather drop the "not in panties/clothes" stipulation but aside from that I don't see a problem with it. In fact, do that and I'd really like it.

I didn't really mean to type that much it just kinda got away from me, hehe.

and it's not that I don't like it in the panties, it's just I like it more when it's not in them.

basically I just had the idea of: guy in girls body takes a dump.

thats just how it ended up when I explained it, hehe

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Quote from: OrpheumZero on October 08, 2007, 09:17:43 PM
Since it would kinda get a bit dumb to switch between one fetish or another for each contest. I thought maybe we could do this:

Everyone presents an original story (their own characters, worlds, etc) then the winning story becomes the focus of the next contest where everyone writes a continuation/sequel for whoevers story won the previous.

So like say Poowrite does a fantasy/thriller and it wins, contest VI has everyone doing a follow-up to his.

That would be a neat way to flow right into the next contest and spice up new things, but we could also still use an existing series if everyone preffered that (kinda like my Code Lyoko fic and the spin-offs by PW and AL).

After that, I would say contest VII be something new. (Though I think maybe we could all do a Final Fantasy VII theme for that one :P)

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Quote from: Nia on October 15, 2007, 12:41:18 AM
I think a good theme might be:

a young girl and guy (like a friend, or a crush, or a classmate, or maybe even a brother, some other guy) some how end up in each others bodies, and the girl needed to take a big dump before hand, ( or she was constipated, or was a side effect of switching bodies or what ever the reason.) so the guy has to take a dump in a girls body  before they can get their bodies, (for any reason, like just couldn't hold it , or had to be able to switch back or what ever.) but not in panties/clothes.

so basically: guy switches bodies with young girl, and has to take a dump not in panties/clothes.

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Quote from: Poowrite on October 15, 2007, 01:35:53 PM
I guess I'll toss an idea out there: a bathroom related story set in a universe that doesn't yet have any stories posted under it. So, Final Fantasy V would be a canidate but not any of the FF games. The category doesn't have to be posted yet (so something like Wild ARMS, Grandia or Disgaea 2) and it can be an original universe, as long as it hasn't been used before, so I couldn't use Kameyo's universe. Also, if there is a story under that universe that hasn't been posted yet, that universe is free game (so even though Omnipresent did the Bleach stories, it'd be okay to use that universe since those stories aren't posted here.)

Finally, if two authors decided to use the same universe for their entry, that's okay. For example, if Orpheum and I both did an Eva story for the contest that would be acceptable. This applies to any non-contest entries posted after the contest begins.

Quote from: Nia on October 16, 2007, 02:03:25 AM
I didn't really mean to type that much it just kinda got away from me, hehe.

and it's not that I don't like it in the panties, it's just I like it more when it's not in them.

basically I just had the idea of: guy in girls body takes a dump.

thats just how it ended up when I explained it, hehe

I see. So you were just offering an example then and not a set of guidlines for the contest. Gotcha' :).

That leaves me unsure where to cast my vote ^^.

I voted for the slumber party, even though I have no idea in mind for my entry.  It gives people a lot of fun options.

N1 has almost no stipulations and could be used in conjunction with another.  N3 is also very loose.

I'm bumping this so people don't forget this poll is underway.

Since it seems mine and Nia's are the closest, I'd just advise anyone who hasn't voted to choose between those two.

Can't wait to see whose idea wins out, and who won contest IV.

Last day ... I'm kinda excited to get the Contest IV voting started and figure out what contest V's theme will be. I'm gonna have to get an early jump on my entry because I'm gonna be away from a PC for a week in November.

Well I guess it's body swap.  Anybody know whose bodies they're going to swap yet?

Toying with Ino/Sakura/(maybe Hinata) myself. I'm thinking maybe re-do the Sports Festival Special that they did but give Sakura the runs instead of Naruto and Ino uses her body-swap technique to ... well I'm drawing a blank after that  ???

Also poking around at something that would fit your (Jimmy's) "Return to Youth" challenge. But, likt the Naruto idea, I'm largely drawing a blank on this one ^^.

I'm wondering, does the body swap absolutely have to be with a guy/girl? If not, I may be able to come up with something, though I am having some thought involving Code Lyoko if the stipulation is "guy and girl.

I hope that it isn't limited to guy/girl swap. Otherwise both my ideas are moot and I'll hafta come up with sumptin new.

I don't think it matters though. The thing only says body swap, so ... hopefully girl/girl swap is okay.

lol, I downloaded the second season of Code Lyoko and a one of the eps had a body swap plot, Odd and Yumi switched bodies upon devirtualizing.

I know the 1st thing I'd do if I were inhabiting a girl's body is drink lots of water, because I want to see a girl pee, even if she's me. ^_^ That might be a good plot for a body-swap fic.

Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on November 04, 2007, 01:22:00 AM
I know the 1st thing I'd do if I were inhabiting a girl's body is drink lots of water, because I want to see a girl pee, even if she's me. ^_^ That might be a good plot for a body-swap fic.

That'd be an interesting take on it. I considered doing the reverse in a story. The guy and girl end up swaping bodies and he (in her body) can't bring himself to use the toilet. They'd be at school or some other public place, so there'd be pressure from the girl (in the guys body) either to switch back as quickly as possible or have him go in her body.

Quote from: Anime Lover on November 04, 2007, 01:16:16 AM
lol, I downloaded the second season of Code Lyoko and a one of the eps had a body swap plot, Odd and Yumi switched bodies upon devirtualizing.

That's actually the episode I would probably use if the rules include that guy and girl have to switch. Though it'd probably be the first time a fight is done precisely in the canon of an episode (filling in blank moments as it were). Though if we can do girl/girl switching, I could tweak the episode so Yumi and Aelita switch.....  ;D

Quote from: Poowrite on November 03, 2007, 07:16:12 PM
Toying with Ino/Sakura/(maybe Hinata) myself. I'm thinking maybe re-do the Sports Festival Special that they did but give Sakura the runs instead of Naruto and Ino uses her body-swap technique to ... well I'm drawing a blank after that  ???

Also poking around at something that would fit your (Jimmy's) "Return to Youth" challenge. But, likt the Naruto idea, I'm largely drawing a blank on this one ^^.

You just gave me a good idea for a story!
Naruto could one day be fascinated with Ino's Mind Swap technique and try to learn it himself. After learning how to do it, he would go out on the streets and experiment with the first person he sees. Hinata speed-walks by and unknowingly becomes Naruto's target. They switch bodies, and he discovers she must have been heading for the bathroom from the feeling he is now experiencing. He wishes to abort, but forgets how to (forgetful as he is), so he runs to the bathroom. After taking Hinata's dump, he returns to where his body laid mindless when his chakra runs out and in turn forces the technique to cancel. Hinata's mind returns to her body and Naruto gets up in his own body. She notices her bowels aren't aching anymore and realizes what must have happened, then her face turns red and faints.

I may have to do that one, if I have the time. I think it's about time for Hinata to finally take a grunt. :D

I actually have a few ideas for anyone who can't think of a good story to type:
1. Raven (Teen Titans) apparently has the ability to see through anyone's eyes (they know it happens, though), even if they are on the other side of the tower. Starfire, Blackfire, Terra, or whomever could be her victim.
2. Beast Boy and Cyborg could enter Raven's mind again through her little mirror and have the "bodily function" side of her (the one wearing orange) take over her body. I don't know if anyone's seen the episode or not, but the orange one belches, clearly indicating she must be Raven's crude personality.
3. There was an episode of Cardcaptors when Kero and Li switch bodies with one of the card's power. Sakura or Tomoyo could switch bodies with another character for a story.

Quote from: Aluru on November 08, 2007, 04:02:48 AM
You just gave me a good idea for a story!
Naruto could one day be fascinated with Ino's Mind Swap technique and try to learn it himself. After learning how to do it, he would go out on the streets and experiment with the first person he sees. Hinata speed-walks by and unknowingly becomes Naruto's target. They switch bodies, and he discovers she must have been heading for the bathroom from the feeling he is now experiencing. He wishes to abort, but forgets how to (forgetful as he is), so he runs to the bathroom. After taking Hinata's dump, he returns to where his body laid mindless when his chakra runs out and in turn forces the technique to cancel. Hinata's mind returns to her body and Naruto gets up in his own body. She notices her bowels aren't aching anymore and realizes what must have happened, then her face turns red and faints.

I may have to do that one, if I have the time. I think it's about time for Hinata to finally take a grunt. :D

Oh man! That's an excellent idea. And since Duce posted in a seperate thread it has to be guy/girl swap my Ino/Sakura idea is kinda out the window :P.

Oh well, back to the drawing board (not that I really had anything done on any of my other ideas).

I figure we could still use 'she' 'her' words for the scenes, just maybe use them like 'Narutor felt Hinata's bladder release and her pee flow' or at least use the guy's name with feminine terms.

If that's ok, I could easily do something, then again it wouldn't technically be writing a guy going (which I just can't really think of  :-X)

I started one, got a page and a half in and was starting to get confused. And I was writing the damned thing  ;D

This one may take some creative thinking if you're like me and are slightly creeped out by using "he" to describe the character takin' care of business. I think I may have a solution, however. I'll hafta see.

Quote from: Poowrite on November 08, 2007, 11:30:45 PM
I started one, got a page and a half in and was starting to get confused. And I was writing the damned thing  ;D

This one may take some creative thinking if you're like me and are slightly creeped out by using "he" to describe the character takin' care of business. I think I may have a solution, however. I'll hafta see.

now that you mention it, I think I'd get slightly creeped out by reading "he" to describe the character takin' care of business. hehe.

and I'm wondering you what you solution is.

Quote from: Aluru on November 08, 2007, 04:02:48 AM
You just gave me a good idea for a story!
Naruto could one day be fascinated with Ino's Mind Swap technique and try to learn it himself. After learning how to do it, he would go out on the streets and experiment with the first person he sees. Hinata speed-walks by and unknowingly becomes Naruto's target. They switch bodies, and he discovers she must have been heading for the bathroom from the feeling he is now experiencing. He wishes to abort, but forgets how to (forgetful as he is), so he runs to the bathroom. After taking Hinata's dump, he returns to where his body laid mindless when his chakra runs out and in turn forces the technique to cancel. Hinata's mind returns to her body and Naruto gets up in his own body. She notices her bowels aren't aching anymore and realizes what must have happened, then her face turns red and faints.

I may have to do that one, if I have the time. I think it's about time for Hinata to finally take a grunt. :D

that sounds like a great fic, though I don't think Hinata would realize what happened, and she would just think that the urge to use it had passed or something and she would go to the toilet and she would think she was constipated cause she can't poop, hehe

at least until she finds out he was practicing it some other day, hehe

I like the idea of this contest but you people have very few categories.  :'( Which limits me to ever type a good story with this contest theme. I was just thinking doing a Bo-bobo-bobo-bo story that deals with with Bo-bobo and Beauty going on their crazy adventure with each other like the usual. Beauty had some tacos since Bo-bobo wanted some also, after they finished eating, Beauty's face cringe for the fact she needs to use the bathroom so she ask Bo-bobo to right for moment because of her emergency but Bo-bobo sassy comments only made Beauty madder which made her needed to use the bathroom more so she decided to go into a nearby bush and about to relieve herself until she felt something touching her hair which look like tenacles that made yell in fright which postpones her business. Bo-bobo reaches to the rescue. One of the head hunters that uses his dreads to change bodies with Beauty but Bo-bobo's fist of the nose hair interferes with the attack then suddenly Beauty in Bo-bobo's body and Bo-bobo is in Beauty's body. Comedy ensues, climax then resolution. It looks short but that's a summary of what I can give at this moment. 

I have been wanting to see Beauty in such a situation (though I do like solid poop from girls more) but the hardest thing is keeping with the overthetop nature of Bobobo. I mean Fooly Cooly, Excel Saga and Abenoboshi are nothing compared to Bobobo's wacked out acid trip every 5 second adventures.

Then again, if you can at least pull off some crazy stunts (maybe have Beauty poop weird objects and have Don Patch in place of her crotch at random points) you just may have it nailed.

Good luck with it.