I just want you guys to know that although my new avatar fic, titled 'Captured' has watersports, it's not desperation, and it's pretty heavy on the meaness, towards Toph, so if you love Toph, you may want to stir clear of the fic. It does have a good ending though.
oh yeah, this is a stand alone fic, it has no place in my three previous Avatar fics
Holy crap watch out behind you! *Points to Poowrite who is sneaking with a menacing look in his face* ;D :P
I did type out a warning ^_^
Don't hurt me Poowrite!
*hides in a corner*
*Hides a crowbar behind his back.*
Was I going to hit you with that crowbar? What crowbar are you referring to, Anime Lover?
Seriously, though I went ahead and read it. I would have preferred Katara be the victim, but it wasn't bad.
Azula really is mean. One of these days, someone needs to make her totally crap her pants. That'll teach her ;D
*peeks head out of corner.*
Yanno, at one point in the 'thinking up' of the fic, I thought about Katara being captured along with Toph and have her subjected to stuff too, but I wanted to focus on Toph, I could see Toph still talk back even though she's being hurt, not so much with Katara ^_^;
I actually considered extending the fic where Toph gets her revenge on Azula and uses her earth bending to, 'return' the favor.