Theme: guy switches bodies with young girl, and has to take a dump not in panties/clothes.
Deadline: Dec. 1st.
How to Enter: when you submit your story add it to the Story Contest V category AND any other categories it belongs to.
Ok, so it DOES have to a GUY switching with a girl.
Well.... I may have to sit on this for a bit, but I might try it. I could easily scratch a situation based on the episode of Code Lyoko where Odd and Yumi got mind swapped. Though I'm wondering, could we at least use the male character with 'she' 'her' nouns? I don't see why not, since they are 'technically' female during that period of time.
Quote from: OrpheumZero on November 08, 2007, 08:29:50 PM
Ok, so it DOES have to a GUY switching with a girl.
Well.... I may have to sit on this for a bit, but I might try it. I could easily scratch a situation based on the episode of Code Lyoko where Odd and Yumi got mind swapped. Though I'm wondering, could we at least use the male character with 'she' 'her' nouns? I don't see why not, since they are 'technically' female during that period of time.
well it was Nia's suggestion so it's her call if she wants it to have to be a GUY switching with a girl.
Um do I have to enter this contest. I mean when say guy switches body with a girl. Does that mean anthro to human, dragon to human, alien to human...etc...etc?
I myself would rather it to be a human girl, or atleast close to human girl.
I'm just curious, can we use 'she' 'her' even after the switch? If so I think I can feel more at ease with doing a story involving a guy (granted it's not really a dude crapping).
I would feel more at ease too if you did, I don't really care for guys crapping.
Nia, I need you to post on my forum, btw.
I'll also have to sit this one out. I'm not really into the idea of switching bodies. I mean, I liked Ranma 1/2, but I get so confused. @_@
FallenStar
Quote from: Nia on November 11, 2007, 11:43:09 PM
I would feel more at ease too if you did, I don't really care for guys crapping.
That should work then, I'll use the episode of Code Lyoko where Yumi was mind swapped with Odd and have Odd handling that side of her business. I'll either use his name with 'her' 'she' tenses or simply 'he felt her body urges' way of description.
Writing mine, or trying to, confused the hell outta me :o.
I think I'm gonna try it from First Person and see what happens.
Quote from: Poowrite on November 13, 2007, 09:24:17 PM
Writing mine, or trying to, confused the hell outta me :o.
I think I'm gonna try it from First Person and see what happens.
You mean like "I could feel her body's ___" so and so forth? That actually might work, that way you can totally avoid the he/him thing entirely.
This should be interesting but my grammar will confuse a lot of people. So I wouldn't even dare type a story like that unless I want to get flames about my grammar =/
Quote from: OrpheumZero on November 13, 2007, 11:37:33 PM
You mean like "I could feel her body's ___" so and so forth? That actually might work, that way you can totally avoid the he/him thing entirely.
Something like that, yeah. We'll see what I come up with :).
is any one almost done with their fic for this contest?
I just whipped up mine. It's short, but then again I couldn't really think of much. But I do think I did well enough in keeping it a girl dump while still makig it clear the guy is going through the action.
Oy! I guess I'm gonna have to do one now, to give you competition. This one's a bugger, though. Much more diffcult than I anticipated, lol.
Your entry was really good, Orpheum. Hopefully I'll be able to come up with something to match it.
Should have mine ready by tomorrow or Friday, assuming Aluru doesn't mind me using his idea :)
I'll have mine up tomorrow, promise :D
*Standing in a crowd of people, hearing the announcement*
Uh-oh.....
*Grabs collar, revealing a mic*
Snake! Abort mission. I repeat; abort!
*Solid Snake is lurking near corner, where Poowrite is standing by making his statement*
Snake: Copy that.
*He puts away tranq and slinks away*
:P
Quote from: Poowrite on November 28, 2007, 07:39:15 PM
Oy! I guess I'm gonna have to do one now, to give you competition. This one's a bugger, though. Much more diffcult than I anticipated, lol.
Your entry was really good, Orpheum. Hopefully I'll be able to come up with something to match it.
Should have mine ready by tomorrow or Friday, assuming Aluru doesn't mind me using his idea :)
Is it the Naruto/Hinata one? I don't mind if you do that one. I never got a chance to start it myself.
It is.
I hope I did everyone's favorite Kunoicih justice. It was a bit of a rush job, I'd like to try her again (maybe 2nd arc hinata?) sometime.
I seem to remember you mentioning you liked soft-poops, Aluru so I tried to give it that consistency since it was originally your idea.
Hope ya'll enjoy it.
I loved it, Poowrite! You did her excellent justice! I already wrote a review for it. ;D
I had a different approach in mind, though. Instead of learning the mind transfer technique on his own, I was going to have Ino teach him, but I wasn't going to make that part too long. Hinata wouldn't have entered the story until Naruto went out on the streets in search of a test subject. I even thought about having Naruto try out Hinata's Byakugan at some point, but I'm not sure if it would be something he could learn to use instantly. Everything else would have basically been the same. :)
I was gonna have Naruto try the Byakugan, too, but decided against it. I think sometime I'll do a story where Hinata gets caught needing a potty in the woods (maybe during the second phase of a Chuunin exam, where they're all in the forest) and she uses it to make sure no one' spying or something like that.
Of course, someone else can have that if they wanna.
I'm glad I went with this story for the contest. I had a couple other ideas, but I think this one worked the best.
Do you plan to revise it, Poowrite?
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I do, I'm working on it. That is to say: that it's on my list of things to do even if I'm not actively working on it :P.
Here's the story behind the revision: I got about six pages into in and realized something. I gave Sakura the runs and added her to the mix, constipated Ino and added her to the mix. So, that was good but aside from adding s'more pooping (which I'm sure everyone would be fine with) I didn't really alter anything.
I also though I might me shafting the pee-lovers, since I did mention somewhere (not in the story itself) that Sakura only had to pee. I kinda felt like I was cheating them by replacing that by making her pee out her butt instead.
I realized that, and came up with a different approach. I thought it might take a while to actually write, though, and I've had a few requests for other stories that I thought would be simple and quick to write and I figured I'd get those out of the way first. I ended up mis-judging how long it would take to finish them, tho :-[
Anyhoo, long story short: yes I'm going to revise it. There will be two chapters, one in which there will be pee-only and one in which there will be solid waste (mostly solid.) I just haven't quite gotten around to starting my re-revision b/c I got caught up in other things.
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