Just in case anyone cares, I've uploaded my RP with Eternal Dragon (who I'm trying to convince to join here =) ) to the story site. If you guys want the continuing saga, you're just gonna HAVE to read it and review it... It's the second best RP I've ever done. ^_^
Guess what? I joined already lol I didn't even know about this place until you told me! :P anyways... please read this guys... I as well want to know what you think of it... I'm always looking to improve my RPing skills and writing skills, I won't say much about the RP cause you gotta read it to get a real option on it.
I just finished it, quite gewd it was. Very interesting and puts me in a situation where I should go read Ap Dat Origins so I know some more of the back story.
Quote from: Poowrite on January 06, 2008, 11:32:50 PM
I just finished it, quite gewd it was. Very interesting and puts me in a situation where I should go read Ap Dat Origins so I know some more of the back story.
*laughs at Poowrite's sig*
Whoever started that tradition should be happy... Not only AL, but you and I have done it, now... I actually need to finish the first one and get back to Kumi... LOL
Oh, and thank you for the reply! I'm going to be working on fixing the second chapter too... ^_^
Ah yeah... lol there are a lot of details... I'm stubborn on that part majorly, if there aren't enough details I feel like I'm not satisfied with it. As for the many disclaimers... the warnings and what not with the many fetishes... lol my range of fetishes is large... though I shudder at the scat, and vomit parts... I endure it. You'll find the race of the main male character Drake is an interesting thing... I took a few aspects and names from something I was previously writing, A book and added it to this RPtoFic thing though this has different names and such and some info not in that, it's more like a parody of what my book is suppose to be. I'll have to write up my origins of Drake's race sometime... I've neglected to do so for a while now and thanks for reading guys, it's good to finally get some reviews about this
Quote from: FallenStar on January 06, 2008, 11:34:46 PM
*laughs at Poowrite's sig*
Whoever started that tradition should be happy... Not only AL, but you and I have done it, now... I actually need to finish the first one and get back to Kumi... LOL
Oh, and thank you for the reply! I'm going to be working on fixing the second chapter too... ^_^
Indeed. A.L. is the first person I noticed doing it. Then Jimmy Olsen and yourself and thought
What the hell...Though to be perfectly honest, that by no means perfectly reflects exactly what I'm working on. KWEST, for example, is on there but doesn't have a single line of code or plot written yet :009:
Quote from: Eternal Dragon on January 07, 2008, 12:00:55 AM
Ah yeah... lol there are a lot of details... I'm stubborn on that part majorly, if there aren't enough details I feel like I'm not satisfied with it. As for the many disclaimers... the warnings and what not with the many fetishes... lol my range of fetishes is large... though I shudder at the scat, and vomit parts... I endure it. You'll find the race of the main male character Drake is an interesting thing... I took a few aspects and names from something I was previously writing, A book and added it to this RPtoFic thing though this has different names and such and some info not in that, it's more like a parody of what my book is suppose to be. I'll have to write up my origins of Drake's race sometime... I've neglected to do so for a while now and thanks for reading guys, it's good to finally get some reviews about this
Well I look forward to the next part. To bad about your feelings about poopin' though. Ah well, ya' win some ya' lose some :).
Quote from: Poowrite on January 07, 2008, 12:08:05 AM
Indeed. A.L. is the first person I noticed doing it. Then Jimmy Olsen and yourself and thought What the hell...
Heh, AL was the first one I saw doing it and I figured pretty much the same thing... It was a kickass sig and I really liked it... LOL
lol, I didn't realise I had an influence other ppl ^_^
I came up with the idea of doing fic status reports on my sig on my own, it's a way for me to keep track of my fics.
If you noticed, I've added a new section in my sig. Having finally seen the end of Code Lyoko, I can finish my 'For ...' series
I forgot I got the idea from Anime Lover and had been thinking I started the trend. :-[
Coincidentally I just made an index of all my completed short stories. I have 32.
I stole it from AL, but honestly mine doesn't actually mean much :). I tried to order them by currently active projects but, aside from the Contest entry, the two I have devoted most of my thoughts to are The Princess (though I haven't actually started writing) and KWEST (though I haven't really started coding).
So, yeah, you can probably, mostly, disregard mine :009:
Quote from: Poowrite on March 08, 2008, 11:13:16 PM
I tried to order them by currently active projects but, aside from the Contest entry, the two I have devoted most of my thoughts to are The Princess (though I haven't actually started writing) and KWEST (though I haven't really started coding).
Maybe we should make a "Princess" story contest. It would give me incentive to finish mine. I need lots of references to make it accurate, but fortunately I made a full bibliography before I put the project on hold.
We could do that, though I planned to take mine beyond the challenge you issued. Your challenge was slated to be chapter two, but I could submit it as being part of the contest, I guess.
Multiple chapters? Now I'm really interested. Well you could submit 2+ chapters as single long story and use that as an entry. Or we could make a more general contest and you could enter Chapter 1. Of course this would be Contest VIII or later so there's no need to figure everything out now.
Yeah, a handful of chapters. I've got the Princess and her rescuer mostly worked out in my head. I've got a reason behind her capture as well. I think I know how the first couple chapters will procede. I having some trouble deciding on the bad guy and coming up with an ending, though. That's the only thing holding mine up.
Sounds great! For future cutting-and-pasting, should this become an actual contest, here is the challenge and the rules I have in mind:
A captured princess or other damsel in distress wets and/or messes herself for lack of other options while chained up in a dungeon, tied to a chair, or held captive in some other clich?ed way (for imprisonment, not sexual purposes). Subsequent rescue by a hero is optional, but recommended. Basically this is a way to turn the "woman held prisoner by bad guys and rescued by hero" scenario from countless adventure novels, comic books, movies, cartoons, video games etc. on its side by addressing the real-life bodily needs of the captive.
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Okay, I think I've let this go on long enough. This was supposed to be a topic about the RP-to-fic thing I was doing for Eternal and my RP and it's gotten WAAAAAAAY off-topic. :P
You guys mind taking this conversation to another topic so I can clean up this one and get back on track with discussion about this RP? (I plan on uploading more chapters really soon :) )
For what it's worth, I've posted the next three chapters of this RP-turned-fanfic, so if anyone wants to read, it's there for you guys. =)
well Poowrite since you really didn't take to chapter 4 well... you should know I will be putting Drake through some torture later on in the series... as for they sounding evil or like villains, they aren't that's probably going to be the one time that happens, if my memory serves me right. Drake though, you'll see him develop a little more as the series goes on, so just keep watching ;D You might like the results, as for all the sweatdrops and such... me and Fallen did these or the beginning of these chapters roughly months and months ago, my skill as an RPer has greatly improved since then so worry not... I try not to fit to many of those "sweatdrop" things in there to often
Like I told FS, my intent was not to offend anyone and I hope I haven't.
The problem with chapter 4 was that it felt less like I was reading erotic torture and more like I was reading plain old torture. I can't explain why, there's no reason for it that I know of, but that has always ruffled my feathers something fierce.
FallenStar already explained to me why I shouldn't waste my, uh, breath mentioning the whole sweatdrop thing. I'm sure I mentioned it somewhere before anyhow (though I may be mistaken) but I felt like I needed something other than a rallying cry for the death of your heroes in my review ;)
Quote from: Poowrite on March 25, 2008, 11:53:21 AM
Like I told FS, my intent was not to offend anyone and I hope I haven't.
The problem with chapter 4 was that it felt less like I was reading erotic torture and more like I was reading plain old torture. I can't explain why, there's no reason for it that I know of, but that has always ruffled my feathers something fierce.
FallenStar already explained to me why I shouldn't waste my, uh, breath mentioning the whole sweatdrop thing. I'm sure I mentioned it somewhere before anyhow (though I may be mistaken) but I felt like I needed something other than a rallying cry for the death of your heroes in my review ;)
Oh, you'll get it... trust me... That first series of chapters, Eternal and I were "getting used" to each other. As we go along, both our skills improve *greatly*.. and the erotic torture starts actually being... well... erotic... lol
uhh... no kidding... man... I remember that all to well... the beginning of RPing was crazy... but yeah... it was bumpy to begin with, but that's how skills are built... you had those skills already... me... I had some skills but not enough to be considered a good RPer. I can say though I am happy in how this whole RP turned out, it's helped me develop my writing skills, considering I do want to become a novelist. (I'll post more details if anyone wishes to know more.) but anyways... the upcoming chapters I do hope everyone likes , though there are some parts others might not like... I urge others though to keep on reading to see the story develop more and more, don't shy away from reading the chapters even if they get negative ratings or reviews...