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Well, finally I managed to get an entry into a contest!

It was tricky for me, not just because my anime literacy is weak, but because I've got this... thing about writing fanfic.  If I'm writing stories about someone else's characters, I feel this (for lack of a better word) ethical obligation to write "real" stories - things that I can convince myself would be a legitimate part of the story.

That makes it nearly impossible for me to write Azumanga Daioh wetting fics.  AzuDai is a light-hearted but semi-realistic story where nothing bad really happens; I can't convince myself that a wetting accident would ever be a part of the AzuDai universe.

Fortunately, Strawberry Marshmallow doesn't have that problem.  Miu Matsuoka's exactly mean enough to try to get her friends to wet herself for a joke, and humiliating things happen (especially to Matsuri!) all the time.  And really, if you start with the really obvious idea of Miu coming up with a hold-it contest, the characters pretty much write themselves.

I need to start watching Lucky Star.  It's not as mean-spirited, but it's wacky enough that wetting could fit...

(For the record, on the last story contest (Desperate Teacher), I was planning to write a Pani Poni Dash fic, starring, naturally, Becky Miyamoto as the desperate teacher.  I just didn't have time to really sort it out before the contest expired.  I may end up writing it anyway, someday...)

Hello there!  Kimiko here, author of the Audrey series.  Which I need to take a break from for a while... although I've enjoyed writing it, lately it's gotten a bit too loli even for me 

So I'm contemplating writing a one-shot involving high school students caught cheating on an exam...

Quote"I'll give you all a second chance.  I'll prepare an alternate exam for you to take this Friday after school."  The girls' expressions brightened, but before they could exclaim their gratitude, he raised a hand.

"However!  If you wish to be allowed to take the exam, there will be two conditions.  First: from the time you arrive at school Friday morning to the moment you turn in the make-up exam, you are not to take your panties off during the school day - for any reason."  He looked around, to see if the students understood.

He was not disappointed.  Elizabeth raised her hand.  "Wh...what if we have to go to the bathroom, sir?"

"Why, you'll just have to hold it," said Mr. Andrews.

"All day?!" exclaimed Elizabeth, her eyes widening in shock, and beginning to glisten with tears.  "That's not fair!"

Mr. Andrews wasn't surprised that Elizabeth was the first to catch on.  He knew that a childhood illness had left her with an unusually weak bladder; back in fifth grade, she'd wet herself twice in the same day, earning her the nickname 'Betsy Wetsy'.  Even now, in high school, she generally needed to visit the facilities four or five times a day, and he himself had observed her squirming in her seat toward the end of his class.

Nevertheless, he was unmoved.  "Sorry, my dear.  You could just take the F you'd earned-"

"No!" squealed Liz in horror.  "I, I mean-"

"I'm not finished," interrupted Mr. Andrews, to a chorus of gasps.  He could almost see the unspoken You mean there's more? on the girls' faces.  "Second: regardless of whether you manage to hold it during school, you will not be allowed to begin until all of you have urinated and defecated in your panties."

"What?" shouted Annie, incensed.  She was the athletic sort, and Andrews guessed that she'd fully expected to be able to hold it all day.  It must've come as a shock to find out that her iron bladder would do nothing to spare her the shame of dirty underwear.

Ignoring the outburst, the teacher continued.  "You may soil yourself anytime you like during the day.  But to be fair to all of you," he said, glancing at Liz and Annie, "you will all be required to wet yourself after you arrive."  He held up a tray, one foot square, with a lip about half an inch.  "When you arrive for the exam, you will change into your gym uniforms, and you will each stand in one of these trays.  The exam will not begin until all four of your trays have overflowed with urine."

Is anyone interested in watching this scenario play out?

I wish I had any ideas that worked with these contests.  Unfortunately, I haven't kept up with enough anime to write a decent "What happened when..." story, and I don't have enough an interest in medieval times (and more importantly, clothing styles) to generate something for that.

In case there's someone willing to help with suggestions on "What happened when...", here's the series I feel I know well enough to write about, in no particular order:

Pani Poni Dash
Strawberry Marshmallow
Azumanga Daioh (not really comfortable about writing my "sort" of story for this, but...)
Xenogears
Xenosaga I and II
Final Fantasy VII

Maybe a few others I haven't thought of.  (I definitely do not know enough about Sailor Moon, Bleach, Naruto, Inuyasha, etc. to write for those...)

You may also find it useful to search on the Japanese text for omorashi (おもらし or お漏らし)

Other useful terms:
onesyo/onesho (おねしょ) - bedwetting
omutsu (おむつ) - diapers
oshikko (おしっこ) - pee
unchi/unko (うんち　うんこ) - poop
gaman　(我慢) - patience, self-control (not useful by itself, but included with some of the others translates to 'desperation', so for example, "おしっこ我慢" would be pee desperation)
and can't forget pantsu (ぱんつ) - take a wild guess

edited to add: I don't know any real Japanese either, honestly.  I came by all these by finding Japanese sites devoted to our fetishes where the words were spelled out in romanji (English letters) and figured it out from there.

Other anime involving teachers who could have entertaining desperation scenes:

Onegai Teacher
Azumanga Daioh

And that's just off the top of my head (and I don't watch a whole bunch of anime either).

Actually, there's a third one, but I'm totally planning to use that one so back off   ;D

Theme: Control Issues

Description: Someone gains full control of a girl's bodily functions (via hypnosis, magic, what have you).  That is, not only is the victim unable to hold it when her tormentor decides it's time for her to relieve herself, but she can't even go on her own - the controller can make her hold it till it suits him/her.