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I am planning to work on this during the week as well

No, it's definitely up.

Quote from: Toasty on July 27, 2014, 06:08:28 PM
PS: If you actually go through with this, it might even inspire me to finally finish my mostly complete story about Penelo, Ashe and Fran from Final Fantasy XII...seriously, I've been trying to think of the perfect ending for like three years now -_-

Oh my god, you're killing me. BlueSniper, for the needs of many, put pen to paper!

But in all seriousness, I was a huge fan of Schizophrenia, and your other stories are some of the better ones on the site as well. I've missed your writing ever since re-reading some of your fics a week or two ago and would love to read more. I have no qualms about original fiction, it lets the writer stretch their creative muscles to create a genuinely fine-tuned story without the temptations of using pre-existing characters and scenarios as a crutch (not saying there's anything wrong with that, but I feel like not using existing universes can lead to a more engaging and creative story). I'm certainly a fantasy fan as well, as are many on here. Besides, even if they weren't, Schizophrenia showed that you have such a knack for painting a fantasy setting and making it engaging aside from the. Nyou-related elements that it would be harder to hate than to enjoy.

I'm going to have to cast my vote in for Skyward Sword: Earthbound Princess. Desperate damsels are always a welcomed sight and Zelda fics, as you said yourself, are few and far inbetween. Who doesn't love Skyward Sword Zelda, am I right?

I'm happy you asked for me to take a look at them, but I should tell you I'm not exactly one adept at critiquing or writing in general. I would be open to reading and helping any way I could, but I would look into getting one of the more experienced nyou writers to look into it as well.

Oh yeah, for some reason I remembered her actually being transformed back. Slip of the brain on my part. Still, though, cyborgs can be desperate too right? They've never specified against it, so fair game.

Yeah, I can definitely see the high school universe idea going well with Pokemon or Smash (pokemon moreso), which definitely lends to some more traditional and less canon-breaky stuff with girls from different generations. Could see it for Smash as well, but I don't think it would be as believable considering a large amount of the girls are from a medieval, castles and dragons-esque universe (Mario counts as that right? I mean the princess lives in a castle but Mario is also a go kart driver and doctor so idk). Could still definitely work though, since host universes are hardly top priority in that sort of crossover universe fic.

I also totally get the timeframe choice for the reasons you stated, totally justified because of the other two staying young and all.

Getting your thoughts together is always a great thing. Letting everyone see it is even better, since it gets us excited for what's to come ;D

Definitely all great ideas here. Very happy to hear that much of the FFVII story is put down on pixilated paper. There are few people who can resist the allure of a single one of those beautiful FF ladies, so having more than one of them (all being desperate at that) is sure to please. Can't wait!

As for the DBZ story, my usual introductory piece of advice for a work featuring a pre-existing universe of any kind is to find instances where your desired instance would be possible. Since you have your little timeframe roped off, you're already better off than many. Since it is after the Cell Saga, you might want to focus on Android 18's recent changing back into a human thru the Dragon Balls. 18 hasn't been fully human in a long time and as such hasn't had a digestive system. Potential, Nyou-related problems can arise from this. I'd say 18 could be unused to having to stop for the restroom to the point where she inadvertently holds it off to the point of a near accident, leading to the coveted desperation scene that ring the audience in before the expulsion. I'm not too sure how Bulma and Chi-Chi fit into the story, however. I would suggest something like "three girls go out shopping and end up getting desperate all at once" or something but that seems very boring for a series as bombastic as DBZ. I like the idea so far, and this is only a suggestion, so you can obviously do what you find more interesting.

Pokemon has a ton of potential too. Each Generation has access to a female main character at least, accompanied by opposing female trainers, female Gym Leaders and champions, rivals, and more. This, in tandem with the similarities to the modern world, can make for some standard desperation scenes that are plausible in real life (waiting in line desperation, having to relieve themselves in the woods and behind buildings, tou get the picture). What makes Pokemon so unique is the potential involvements of the monsters in the story. Is a Snorlax blocking the way, leading to a few of the bursting PokeGirls to wake it up and move it before they lose their waste? (with the aid of their pokemon which, for added hilarity and heightening desperation, are all water types. Possibly a Water Gym?) Does a Poison-Type Pokemon attack our heroine, giving her an instant case of the runs? Does a confusing and perverted Gym Leader offer a nyou-related task instead of a battle in order to earn the badge, a request our spunky future PokéMaster is too determined to refuse? The possibilities are truly endless, and I'm excited to see it.

Smash Bros is kind of tricky, since the story mode doesn't lend to any ideas, nor does the core gameplay. However, I can foresee it as a great chance to create crossovers with the female cast in One on One fights that could either force the loser to succumb to a Nyou punishment or contests involving the nyou itself.

I don't have much of an idea for the rest of the series' you mentioned, but I would be interested to see those as well.

Happy writing, my friend! 

Theme: "I'll show you that it's no big deal."

Description: Our heroine (whether it be original or from a pre-existing series.) has an accident in some situation or another. Whether it be caught in the act or caught after the shameful wetting or messing, our main character's accident is discovered. Struck by the embarrassment of her friend/foe/etc., the person who finds her decides to show her that accidents are no big deal by intentionally messing or wetting herself, all in an attempt to comfort the main character.

Ooh, this is a cool question. It'll be interesting to see the answers that rear their heads from the community that have put up dirty stories from everyone from Erin E-Surance to Hermoine Granger 

If I could make anything that could be considered a list on the subject, I guess I would have to include Saki Morimi from Eden of the East. This character really carries (along with a lot of my list) a certain "cuteness" that causes me to just totally look upon them as cute and nothing else. I've tried fabricating some sort of fictional adventure for Saki, but I seriously cannot think of a single scenario that would even feel right to put her in. That's probably just me though.

The rest of my list is pretty much any character that I find inexplicably cute, as well as characters that act or are portrayed as simply too young for me to find a story with them and Nyou-related content to be attractive.

Quote from: UndeadRiot on January 12, 2013, 08:00:07 PM
Oh, okay, that's good to know. Thanks for the info, man.

no problem

Quote from: UndeadRiot on January 12, 2013, 02:32:00 PM
Oh, my bad, I allways try not to make people mad. Like this one time when I was playing Red Orchestra: Ostfront, on Steam, let's just say me and this guy (Who was really polite) were trying to talk, and then this other guy started interupting us by saying: "Shut up. No one cares." Dude, me and the polite guy were only talking about the game and what not, and this guy was being a major jerk. Anyway, I don't know if it was something I said or what, but he made me mad because in the back of my head I'm going: "Dude, what's your problem? I haven't done anything to make you mad, chill out, man." But, yeah, I'm afraid of making people mad on the internet.

I see. Well, you don't worry about that around here. We're a pretty friendly community

Quote from: UndeadRiot on January 08, 2013, 08:49:38 PM
Cool, dude. That's good to know someone found your request and made your photo. If only I was this lucky. Not trying to be a jerk, just saying.

Just asking, why do you always say "Not trying to be rude/a jerk, just saying/asking"? Like, no one is going to get "this guy's being a jerk" from that post.

Also, If I was going to choose an obscure girl that I would like to see, it would be Oichi from Samurai Warriors. Upon beating Pokemon: Conquest, I instantly fell in love with her. Even though it says she's like 15 in her bio for the first Samurai Warriors, it looks like she may be a bit older than that in the new SW games and P:C (Maybe 17/18)

Quote from: Emperor on November 15, 2012, 10:34:36 PM
I really dunno where the story stands, or if you are still doing it, but I just wanna let you know I'm ultra excited for it! Just know you got my support in this one dude!

hehe thanks man. I just haven't gotten a ton of time to write in the past couple weeks, so it may take a spell before it shows up on the site. Rest assured, it's still happening

Quote from: OrpheumZero on November 07, 2012, 08:36:03 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=beAf21-ROv4#ws

A strange one... But hey, NAY-KED Butt!

I saw this one yesterday, actually. It was a little odd, but I really enjoyed it.

Alright! The votes are now closed! And the winner is...

JURI HAN!

Thanks for all the votes, guys! I loved this experience and am really looking forward to writing a Juri story. In fact, I already have a pretty solid idea in mind  . See you guys later, and don't be worried if your favorite character didn't make the cut, I'm looking forward to writing fics for all of these characters at one point or another!