a story i wrote

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a story i wrote some time ago, some of you may remember i told you about a gadget story i was writing, here it is.

if anyone wishes to make revisions please do so. if you wish to repost the revision please give me credit

note this is not a masterpiece

   Gadget couldn't hold it anymore, she had put it off all day and now she was paying for it. She shuffle-ran down the hall, clenching her butt cheeks together, pooting the whole way till she came to the door.
   "Hello?" she knocked. No reply. She tried the door, it was locked.
  She knocked again. "Hello please is someone in there?" but still no reply.
  She tried once more. "PLEASE this is an emergency!" But the same response was given.
   "God damn them!" she said, shuffle-running in the same fashion the other way. "It would be like them to leave the light on AND lock the door!" Her thoughts were rudely interrupted by a sharp pain in her gut, and another rancid fart sounding off and filling the space around her with a foul odor.
   She was about to give up and use the nearest garbage can to relieve her bowels when a thought struck her. In a Victorian era house across the street, one she had visited so many times before, there was a bathroom. The house itself has not been occupied for years yet the water and electricity were still active. Without missing a heartbeat, and still doing the I-have-to-take-a-huge-dump dance, she scuttled her way across the street and into the neighboring house. The house was massive, a testament to the time and era in which it was erected in. The inside, though bare, shared the same Victorian era décor as the outside walls and paneling. Despite its ancient appearance, Gadget knew for a fact it had a working toilet, and was keen to find it. Shuffling to every door, she came to a dead end at each one. The door that was the gateway to bliss just seemed out of reach, all but forgotten. That is until she reached the door nearest the back door. Upon opening she almost squealed with delight. Not only was there a toilet, complete with toilet paper, but a towel on the rack, soaps and things located on shelves above the bathtub, and a window to allow the foul smells to vent away. It almost seemed like the house was getting ready to be showcased to potential buyers.
   Gadget wasted no time, slamming the door and locking it, she opened the window and almost in the same breath dropped her pants and panties just as a turtles head was begging to show. She slammed her bum right on the toilet, and in that very second released the first of her problems. With an audible "Splash!" accompanied by a parade of flatulence, Gadget, slouching back  into the toilets seat sighed with relief and happiness as she was finally able to poop since the day started.
   Gadget Sat there in pure bliss. The feeling of that long turd leaving her body was almost cause for celebration for her. However her time of ecstasy was short lived, as a sudden buildup of pressure in her rectum was cause for alarm. She knew it was not going to be the only turd; more was to come once this had been released. She accepted this, and righted herself.
   "Right, one at a time if I can help it" she said.
   The first log was a doozy to drop, she squirmed left and right and pushed with all her might but nothing seemed to work. Until she lifted her legs off the ground only a few inches was she able to find the leverage she needed to finally persuade the log from her bum. With a low "klump" relief was found almost instantly.

   However, it was of course, as she knew, not the only log. However, compared to the bomb she just dropped, the next of its kin followed with ease. She put almost no effort into the logs that followed as one by one, with occasional toots and the "kerplops" and "plops." Her dump became more and more enjoyable. Her bladder too needed to be exiled, and she wasted no time letting the gold liquid flow from her body and flood the water beneath her. With both her bowels and bladder relieving themselves together, she was already in a world of trouble. The fist log she dropped was quite large (she already knew that) but she didn't know just quite how big it was, it had jammed itself into the toilets pipework and swelled there, clogging the toilet. Gadget hadn't the slightest idea what she had done as she pooped and peed without a care in the world, slowly filling the bowl beneath her.
   After a minute passed her bladder was at last empty, but her bowels still had some evicting to do. The stools by this time were not only longer, but looser, as Gadget found it at times a bit difficult to stop the flow of poo from her bum, just so she could catch her breath. Gadget found herself enjoying almost every minute of her defecating, every log and every splash into the bowl felt wonderful. Some turds even made her giggle as their quick exit tickled her bum ever so slightly.
    After the passing of 10 minutes, and with one final push, the last turd left her body, and gadget sighed a heavy sigh of relief. She was done, it was over. Yes the smell In the room was enough to molest the wall paper that still clung to the walls but it was worth it. She had never felt such a sensation before.
   She grabbed a healthy amount of toilet paper, and had spread her legs to wipe when she looked down. In an instant her feelings of ecstasy and joy were replaced with horror and disgust.   The water had risen to much higher than it should have been, and filled with the largest and most dense turds she has ever seen. She stood right up and looked at the mess she created. As if to intimidate her, the first of the bunch sat right in the middle, swollen and blocking the main pipe.
   "No.. No no no golly NO!" she shouted, and made her first mistake, and tried to flush the toilet.