Two in Harmony/One in Perfection

[SharkBait]

Hey guys, I'm a LONG time lurker (like, 2 years I guess? Of the nyou boards anyway, I think I signed up here about a year ago.) and I just wanted to let you know that I REALLY love this site, and I'm planning to finally post something of my own here! Well ok, I will when it's done...

Anyway, I had the idea earlier this morning, after a long, delirious night of gaming and general partying with a friend. If you've played SMT: Persona 3, you'd probably know the Kirijo Group's motto is "Two in harmony surpasses one in perfection." Well, this may be applied to a rather...unorthodox subject.

Uh-uh, not going to spoil the plot or even the premise right here! You'll have to wait until I'm finished. The story will feature Yukari/Mitsuru though, and it'll be written in two parts. Hope you enjoy my first attempt! In the meantime, hope you guys crank out those stories, we've got some fairly talented people here.

[Toasty]

Nice! I, for one, encourage anyone to graduate from lurker status, and I look forward to your story. As for the premise...if it has anything to do with buddy dumping, which is awesome, then I'm officially looking forward to it. Can't wait!

[OrpheumZero]

Agreed. It's always good to see someone step out of the shadows and become productive.

[SharkBait]

Agreed. It's always good to see someone step out of the shadows and become productive.

Is what we "do" really "productive?"

But yeah, it does have to do with sort of buddy dumping. It's just something I thought up when I was in a half-asleep daze after playing like 8 hours straight to beat P3.

And thanks for the welcome! I wasn't even expecting a reply on the same day. I mostly visit pretty slow forums, I'm not used to all this activity. I do believe I'm getting lightheaded...

[SharkBait]

Chapter 1 is up! I polished it off in an hour, so if there's any big mistakes or you have any complaints to air (or suggestions for chapter 2), lemme know.

[yarr]

Very good, carry on. 

[SharkBait]

There, this fic is all wrapped up. I might write some more Persona 3 stuff later, I really love the characters. However, I also just started P4...we'll see where that goes. 

I've got at least one or two other stories I want to write, I have a pretty twisted mind. Hope you like 'em, at any rate!

[Poowrite]

I popped it open so's I could read, rate n' review when I saw:

"4. Semi-major spoilers for Persona 3. (The ending anyway, but not the particulars.) "

and that gave me pause. I haven't played P3 yet, but I've played through about 75% of P4 and really like it. I'm planning on playng P3 on the PSP when it comes out in July (the ability to control all party members in combat is a major draw to me). If I read your story, will I know how the game ends. 'Cause... I don't wanna 

[SharkBait]

I popped it open so's I could read, rate n' review when I saw:

"4. Semi-major spoilers for Persona 3. (The ending anyway, but not the particulars.) "

and that gave me pause. I haven't played P3 yet, but I've played through about 75% of P4 and really like it. I'm planning on playng P3 on the PSP when it comes out in July (the ability to control all party members in combat is a major draw to me). If I read your story, will I know how the game ends. 'Cause... I don't wanna 

Ah shoot, well sort of. Like I said, there aren't any particulars, and in fact there's two endings (in FES anyway, dunno about P3P). But yeah, I couldn't decide where to set it among the events of P3, so I just chose the end. If you REALLY don't want to take a chance, don't read it.

Also, I kinda like not having to control the rest of the party. They only rarely goof up big time. I sort of switch in and out in P4 with that function.

[Roolbar]

Pretty good one. I hope you keep writing.

[Jimmy Olsen]

You seem good with descriptions.  I'd love to read a masturbation-free fic by you (it's a turnoff for me).