Deleted my first fic, gonna try another.

[Waru]

Well, I figured I'd replace the BAD TF:A fic with a possibly GOOD TF:A fic, meaning:

-Sari's a Mary Sue: No bad comes to her (as she should be)
-She's a precocious little scamp
-this is more light-hearted, funny, and naughty, compared to dark, scary, and making you feel bad for the character it's happening to.

The pitch?

k then... now I just simply need to work a premise around it... I was thinking something like fulfilling some sort of report for her Tutorbot, on nature. Of course, Sari finds the Tutorbot annoying and insistant, so she gets permission from her father to use one of the many mini-subs (used in the Survival of the Fittest episode), along with a tracker (so she won't be "kidnapped" or "missing") to Dinobot Island... she brings PDA and stylus (instead of Pen and paper), along with mirror and camera... her report on nature? As her way of saying "fuck you" to the Tutorbot, in her own special way, her report is on the act and results of human defecation untampered by modern necessities (like a toilet). She has the PDA and stylus to type down research info, the mirror for "study", and the camera for physical proof.

Once she's done what she's done, and actually does the report (lol). The Tutorbot proclaims this as both not following the criteria, and as an excuse to harbor child pornography, to which Sari does some sort of mind-fuck with the Tutorbot (like how this IS a nature report, since it being done in a natural place and being a natural act, and how the Tutorbot, since it now has the photos, could be scrapped for having CP, itself)... to which he "freezes", leaving Sari with recess for the whole day.


Soooooo.... does this seem like a good idea? For those of you who've seen the show, is there anything I should add to make this seem less like a forced thing? And don't tell me "It's up to me", because this fic IS up to me, but to make this enjoyable, fappable, and believable are big concerns that I feel my audience might help with. To make sure that the naughty little munchkin in this fic doesn't seem OOC, and to make this s neat and with little to no holes in the plot (maybe even have Grimlock somewhere in the fic for a quick laugh, as well).

[OrpheumZero]

It's interesting, though I never too much trouble with the original, my only dislike was that Sari seemed to loli to me.... and yes I know I like Ruki, Izumi, Kari, Sora, Mimi, Juri, and Yolei from Digimon 
But it certainly was more creative than the shitty 'original' you based off of, I mean, how do you give a robot an enema? 

But this does sound interesting. One idea could be to use her 'older' self, since that would allow her to just go hybrid mood apeshit on the robot. Otherwise I'm kinda drawing a blank, though I do admit the idea of a girl abusing a robot kinda makes think of something Pan would do to Giru in Dragon Ball GT *which I did do in the old multi-path*

I say go for it.

[Waru]

I would've figured Season three's Sari, being a Teenager... Isaac would've finally had the excuse to have the Tutorbot scrapped, since its programming was far too primitive and outdated for anything beyond Elementary School teaching.

Hmm... still... I also kinda see Teen Sari, being all more matured and "knowing stuff as if it were a second nature"... why would pooping on a semi-abandoned island make sense...? Especially since I'm sure Biology and "nature walks" are on two different spectrums of education... ya know.

Wait.. abusing a robot...? *puts two and two together* YOU WANT HER TO USE THE TUTORBOT AS A MAKESHIFT COMMODE?!?!? That's both wrong, AND hilarious (dunno if I should do something like that, unless it's a two-parter yet not, the first portion taking place after Survival of the Fittest, and the second portion being somewhere during Season Three, or after it)!!

[OrpheumZero]

Wait.. abusing a robot...? *puts two and two together* YOU WANT HER TO USE THE TUTORBOT AS A MAKESHIFT COMMODE?!?!? That's both wrong, AND hilarious

Hey! You know that the bit in the Dragon Ball GT story where Pan poops in Giru was both comedy gold and pure awesome souce!!! (Just kidding, but you know it's true! )

[Toasty]

I second Orpheum's opinion that using a robot as a toilet is, and I quote, "awesomesauce". I would totally read that story, just saying.

And I too think I would like a story with a teen Sari better. But I also think you should just write whatever you want and not worry about it too much.

[Jimmy Olsen]

Yes, using a robot as a toilet is as cool as using a shapeshifter as a toilet (read "The Lights Go Down!" ;D ).

[Toasty]

Oh yeah! Another awesome instance of...uh...talking things being used as toilets.

Man, a lot of weird things get used as toilets on this site. We should think of some more.

*makes thread*