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[ruffryder]

Hello

I just wrote a Dragonball Z story on the fiction site and want to people to see if it is good or not. I stated in the story that began writing it on writing.com but i was over the character limit. I will take criticism cause i wanna know my flaws and become a better writer. This is were you can find most of my work on writing.

http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/action/show_things/type/chapters

hope everyone likes the story