My assorted updates

[Toasty]

Dude, that's a really awesome idea. Why don't you post it on this site as a round robin? I might just be a snob, but personally I think our community of writers here is better than the one on gurochan, so you're more likely to get good submissions...well, either way, I love this concept. Can't wait to see more, and I wouldn't mind adding to it myself at some point.

[SharkBait]

Actually, I was thinking I'd start a seperate one on here. Would be fun to see how they stack up.

But hey, feel free to get the ball rolling before I do.

[SharkBait]

Also, I agree, we have a much better community. Much more closely-knit with more talented people. We also have a smaller community, so like I said, it'd be interesting to see how the two different "bathrooms" compare.

Like a sociological experiment...with more poop.

[SharkBait]

Ok, third post in a row. Yay for talking to myself! Anyway, it's up. I just reposted the original story for starters.

[OrpheumZero]

Ok. I drummed a quck and random little piece for the thing. Seems like a fun idea. Actually, it kind of reminds me of a failed idea I had which was basically the College Girls Pooping series of candid videos, only with girls from popular anime, manga, games, and comics.  I've got maybe like a paragraph done, but just couldn't figure if it felt sincere enough. And I mean like I wasn't sure if it capture the feel of a being something on tape, and also didn't seem too hokey. Of course, thinking of it like a round Robin could be fun, and of course it would fulfill the lifelong desire of many a CGP viewer who wished to see vignettes without an annoying and chatty cameraman (of course, the little bits could have back and forth talk, only more intelligent than that bonehead KingDavid). 

[Jimmy Olsen]

Curse you, Orpheum!  I wrote my chapter when there was nothing there but SharkBait's beginning, but when I went to post it you'd already posted yours!

Actually, it's not a big deal.  I just had to make some slight rewrites to reflect the damage Faye did.

Edit: I just realized I left out one of the corrections.  Now I can't figure out how to edit my chapter, or if that's even possible.

[Zee_phyro]

already read and review! And wow that's amazing 

[SharkBait]

Jimmy: When you go into the story (as if you were just reading it) there should be a little "edit" button in the upper lefthand corner. If that doesn't work, go into your account info and see if it's listed under your stories. Otherwise I dunno.

[Jimmy Olsen]

That doesn't seem to be working.

[SharkBait]

http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=476&action=viewstory
http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=475&action=viewstory

Hey guys, I've been busy this morning.