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Lyrics to songs.

Started by OrpheumZero, June 12, 2010, 10:09:49 PM

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OrpheumZero

Believe or not, I actually try to write english lyrics for songs from time to time. Granted, it's not easy, as I have no real talent in that kind of thing compared to regular writting. But I have made some decent attempts at song lyrics, ones that could be used for English dubs.

I actually have been interested in trying to do some english dubs of songs, but have no clue as to what program to use. For one, it'd be nice if there was a way to make a 'cue' for when to start singing, since I'm not very good with karaoke versions of songs.

Anyway, here's some lyrics I adapted from a direct translation of Period, the 4th opening theme to Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood.

We sigh whenever we're about to come to a another standstill
While moving forward on this endless journey

Every time that we lunged for it, it takes off and flies away
But now, there's nothing to be afraid of anymore!

The powerful ties that bind our hearts as one
Will never come loose or be torn apart

After a lifetime of searching, we have finally arrived
At this point where, the period lies

This overflowing feeling of kindness surrounds me
And will help me never forgot all these memories

I will keep my promise, and take you on an adventure with me
I will embrace all these dreams, and wishes, and put them into song

I will no longer hide from this harsh reality again
I will face it head-on with boundless courage
Let's change all of our sorrow and rage into a power
Destiny is right within our grasp

Look towards the horizon, where you will see
the new world

The cheers of encouragement that shake my soul
Are something I must never betray
We're living together, for the sake of the future
at this final point, in this period

That shining truth is right in our hands


They certainly seem to 'flow' with the song nicely. But I'm open to any suggestions for changes. 'Course I wish I was better, since I'm eventually planning on doing a musical fanfiction with One Piece, but I just can't think of how to write songs and how it shoud be done so it's not a 'song-fic'.
"Legends are much like tapestries; they erode and fade until truth and lies become indistinguishible." - Original quote.

What's to come:
~ One Piece adventure ("In planning")
~ Inuyasha story
~ Story with girl having to sit between boy's legs on toilet

Linkx

As a guitarist/song writer I know how difficult it is. My lyrics are generally meh and to quote Steel panther "sound like Dr Seuss" meaning I usually end up writing in a simple aabb rhyme scheme or abba which makes me -_-.......

Granted I've never listened to the song as I don't really care for anime except for use in my own perversions hehe but the lyrics read well, good diction strong theme seem like solid lyrics to me.

OrpheumZero

Well I say you should reconsider and watched Fullmetal Alchemist: Broterhood. It's got to be one of the best series ever. The first anime was good, but the alternate story and character interpretations pale in comparison to the original manga/new series. And you're in luck if you're the type who likes to watch a series in bulk, the show will be ending on the 4th of July. From the music, to the epic storyline, it's earned a place on the same ranks as Cowboy Bebop, Ghost in the Shell, Ninja Scroll, and Vampire Hunter D.
"Legends are much like tapestries; they erode and fade until truth and lies become indistinguishible." - Original quote.

What's to come:
~ One Piece adventure ("In planning")
~ Inuyasha story
~ Story with girl having to sit between boy's legs on toilet

OrpheumZero

Here's another set of lyrics, this time written for the first ending theme of Brotherhood "Uso" (Lie).

I borrowed part of it from someone who wrote and sang a full english cover online, but adapted it.

Back when we saw the sky then
On that day the sky was colored red
Well, do you remember anything of that day?

I'll tell you what we promised
On that vow made in the summer winds
Together, we were settled down

You're hiding
behind a painful lie
It's there in the corners
Of your false smile

So therefore, I'll pretend that I don't know
And keep up this little ruse

Waiting for you since I know
You'll say the heartbreaking news
by the table, to me

These hollow nights never cease
they seem to drag on to forever

I never thought
That I would fear the end of the day

Back when we saw the sky then
On that day the sky was colored red
Well, I'm certain that memory someday will show

Having said, still embracing
All those promises that we failed to keep
We're trying but it'll never be

The sounds and colors and temperatures
In this room don't feel the way that they should
Even now, I'm scattered in dismay
I'm tired of being so inept!

You're good at lies and deceit
You once said "I hate lies"
And I believed those wordsSo right now, it comes to a point
where our feelings got hurt in the end
And that's why, it's time we said our goodbyes

Even now I hope someday,
we could meet and hold our hands again

Though...
I don't think we'll see each other and if so

That lie said at that last time
I'll tell you the truth behind those words

So don't forget!

Back when we saw the sky then
On that day the sky was colored red
Well, I'm hoping you'll
think about them once more

We'll return and embrace it
Every promise we could not maintain
Together, holding hands with you
"Legends are much like tapestries; they erode and fade until truth and lies become indistinguishible." - Original quote.

What's to come:
~ One Piece adventure ("In planning")
~ Inuyasha story
~ Story with girl having to sit between boy's legs on toilet

OrpheumZero

More lyrics I came up with. The first part (which I'll mark) was done by some guy named Corey Maddox. The rest I came up with.

Colors [By Flow] from the anime Code Geass. *Corey's lyrics  **My additional lyrics

*♫To change the world, and myself I need to believe in what I can achieve!

And that belief is always and forever in me!

This world's getting worse to my dismay... And I simply looked, the other way.

No Longer!

I faulter, no longer! I worry, no longer! I tremble, no longer!

'Cause now I must choose. When you gave me, the courage to stand and take action.

You gave hope I will never lose!

One time my soul was as dark as the night but then you entered my soul with you light.

I see the sun, my heart knows no limits, today I will live life anew!

I'll open up all my windows to see the sky, that's so blue!

To change the world, and myself

I need to believe in what I can achieve!

And that belief shall always be important to me!

**For a time I never had a goal of my own...

But then you stepped into my life

To give me one! (Sometimes I also use: You gave me one)

One time the world was as dark as the night but then you showed me the way to the light.

I was lost, in a sea of dispair that ate away at my heart

But with your kindness I was able to see the sun, burning bright!

I'll change the world, and myself I will believe in what I can achieve

And that belief will drive my destiny!

I've seen the sun, my heart knows no limts, today I will live life anew

I'll open up all my windows to see the sky, that's so blue

I'll change the world, and myself I have to believe in what I can achieve

And that belief shall never leave me

And with your help I have found my place in the world!

And now my heart, will never know limits ever again...
"Legends are much like tapestries; they erode and fade until truth and lies become indistinguishible." - Original quote.

What's to come:
~ One Piece adventure ("In planning")
~ Inuyasha story
~ Story with girl having to sit between boy's legs on toilet