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Title: Aelita: Converting Yumi Reviewer: asfe Anonymous
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Date: Nov 28, 2015 12:50 am [Report This]
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Date: Dec 08, 2014 08:03 am [Report This]
Title: Aelita Reviewer: OtakuFreak141 Signed
Okay, this was much more graphical than the other story. But, with something like Code Lyoko, I can see now why only registered users are allowed to read a story like this. If any kids who are fans of Code Lyoko read this, it would outrage parents so much that there would be a freakin' world war iii going on and Code Lyoko would never see the light of day in America ever again. But, considering that I am a fan of Code Lyoko, this is quite an interesting story, even though my first reaction was "WHY?!!!" But then, I thought of the reality of it all and now I can see why Aelita would do something like this.
Date: Jan 12, 2012 07:54 pm [Report This]
Title: Aelita: Converting Yumi Reviewer: HaloAnime Signed
Finish this awesome and fuuny story! WE DEMAND A SEQUEL!
Date: Jan 03, 2011 09:12 pm [Report This]
Title: For Jeremie Reviewer: Duce Signed
Not bad at all, pretty good actually, though I'd liked to seen some virtual pooping on Lyoko as well.

but still the end leaves me wondering how she's going to explain to the rest of the gang, as their going to notice a return to the past.

Author's Response:

I currently have no plans for any Code Lyoko fics after this one, but I'm sure it wouldn't stop anyone else from doing pooping in Lyoko ^_^

Yanno, I never really thought about how Aelita would explain the return to that past to the others ^_^;

Date: May 01, 2008 02:34 pm [Report This]
Title: For Jeremie Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

This wasn't half bad. Though I would have liked to have seen some pooping action, it wasn't without it's 'perks'. Though I could've sworn that Sissi knew about the Super Computer at the end of the season/series, just not every little detail about it.

Anyway, hopefully we can see some virtual pooping on Lykoko. That's something I always thought be neat to see, and when you think about it..... Aelita's bowels don't have to necessarily adhere to real life rules in the Super Computer ;)....

Date: May 01, 2008 12:49 am [Report This]
Title: For Jeremie Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Pretty good, not too crazy about this sort of thing, but it's a nice change from the usual sort of story here.

Date: Nov 10, 2007 07:26 pm [Report This]
Title: For Jeremie Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
Just finished both chapters. They were really good and seemed to stick to the spirit of the show. Of course, I don't actually know much about the show.

anyway, if I were XANA, had access to Aelita's source code and wanted to groud her via embarassment I think I'd create a routine that robs her of bowel control :).

As always, great work and thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: That may work for the real world, but not in Lyoko IMO, concidering, usually, any 3d/cgi imege or vid of a body lacks any genitals or even nipples, such as say the character models of DOA (male or felame), even if you remove all there clothes, there would be nothing there, until of course you use your imagination ^_^
Date: Nov 10, 2007 02:31 pm [Report This]
Title: For Jeremie Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Not bad, while I'm more for the fetish side of things, this was still a pretty funny story. Kinda like those more humorous doujins where the characters seem to be aware their in a more perverted situation.

I was gonna say, this certainly couldn't fit into the continuity of the first three, but still a nice addition to the Code Lyoko stories.

 

By the way, William can talk. He's actually gotten a bit chatty as season 4 has gone on, but it's that weird distorted voice like someone possessed when he talks, and it's assumed to be nothing but XANA doing the talking with no hint of William's personality at all.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it ^_^

From the other two sites I've posted this on both replies I've gotten ask when a sequal will be made, since people want it, I may do a part two, staring Yumi and Aelita having fun in Lyoko. It'd most likly lack a plot like this one though if I got around to doing it. 

Date: Nov 05, 2007 06:05 pm [Report This]
Title: For Jeremie Reviewer: EFROdian Signed
Damn!  This is such a good story, PLEASE continue it!  I'm a big fan of Jermemie and Aelita, or maybe even Yumi and Aelita (yay for yuri!).   I love how Aelita acts when she's embarrassed, XANA's cruel genius (I wonder what the possessed William though when he saw Aelita naked; he may be possessed, but he's still a guy), and Yumi's reaction in the end.  Y'know, I like the idea of XANA using embarrassment or "inconvenience" in order to stop Aelita from deactivating a tower or Yumi from fighting in Lyoko (let's just say that explosive diarrhea can be one of those "hindrances" I'm talking about).  Apart from some minor grammatical errors, this story was awesome.  MORE PLEASE!!! 

Author's Response:

Thx, I'm glad you liked it ^_^ 

From the 1-2 season four eps I've seen, I don't remimber the possessed William talking. I actually planned on William to play with Aelita's body when she ran behind the rock and is save before or after an orgasm, but clearly, that didn't happen. 

Date: Nov 05, 2007 05:28 am [Report This]
Title: Aelita: Converting Yumi Reviewer: EFROdian Signed
A very good portion of a story, that I assume is to be continued, correct?  I'm eager to see Yumi enjoy this kind of thing more (though I wonder how Ulrich will take it... or will it be Sissi who finally figures out their secret, and then word gets out, so naturally the Aelita and Yumi have to punish Sissi and... well... I'm getting ahead of myself).  Oh, I was wondering for a while now, but since XANA can control people, does that mean he can also control their bodily functions (it's be a good way to slow the team down; no Aelita means no deactivated tower, and no Yumi means the loss of a very skilled Lyoko warrior).  Anyway, just some suggestions.  More please!

Author's Response: Those are quite good suggestions, I especially like the Sissi one ^_^ rnrnBut I would need to watch a lot more of the show to see what her character is like, I\'ve only seen a handful of episodes. rnWhen saw random Lyoko episodes, I thought Sissi was Yumi\'s sister, boy was I wrong >.<
Date: Oct 26, 2007 03:36 am [Report This]
Title: Aelita Reviewer: EFROdian Signed
Hey, nice job, this fic was awesome!  There were a few grammatical errors, but the story content more tha made up for a couple mistakes.  Man, I can't help thinking that somehow, Aelita is into that kind of thing in the actual show (although we'll never know for sure).  I can't help wondering if Yumi is too... although in my world, every girl'd be into that kind of thing.  At any rate, Jeremie is sure in for a surprise... although I also canot help thinking that he'll like the surprise.  Keep up the good work!  More Yumi and Aelita fics please!
Date: Oct 26, 2007 03:12 am [Report This]
Title: Aelita: Converting Yumi Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
I was happy to see one of my challenges made into a fic, and I enjoyed the result.

My big fear was that you would have 1 or both of the girls would get "overstimulated." I was happy to find it 100% sex-free. I was also happy about Yumi's reaction. She enjoys it and realizes she was too quick to condemn it as wrong, but she doesn't enjoy it immensely. It seems like most stories at Nyou Fiction about deliberate diaper or panty-pooping have the girl think it's the greatest feeling in the world. This story provided a good departure from that trend which is becoming a cliché.

I was afraid the tummy-rubbing was going to turn into something yuri, but you make it come across as a gentle, friendly gesture. But my favorite part isn't the pooping. It's the conversation where Aelita admits she's wearing diapers. It's funny and reveals both their characters well. You also depict Jeremie's embarrassment well. I can just imagine what's going in in his head. I mean, how do you talk to a girl about her diapers? Awkwardness city. ^_^'

It's also nice how the opening scene continues directly from the last Code Lyoko fic. The cooled-down feces is a nice touch, indicating the passage of time and showing how diaper-pooping isn't all pleasant, even for someone who loves it. If Aelita's not careful she'll end up with diaper rash. ^_~

I was disappointed that Yumi didn't pee as well as poop in her diaper. Not only do I like descriptions of wetting more than messing, but it seems to me that logically she would try peeing 1st, since it's less messy and "wrong." It would have been great (from my P.O.V.) if Yumi had had to pee and poop but only agreed to pee in her diaper, until she saw how much Aelita enjoyed pooping in hers. Then Yumi would have tried to add some mess to her wetness but been unable to at first, and from there it would go the way it did in your story.

The pooping seems too brief. It would have been better if Yumi had described to Aelita what the experience felt like to her, and what she liked about it. There doesn't seem to be enough of the kind of friendly dialog that I think would accompany a buddy diaper-dump.

Also, like many stories here, the tense changes. It's mostly in present tense, but sometimes it's in past tense.

But even with these weaknesses this is a very entertaining story, and my favorite that you've written. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading ^_^, I took the fact that it was a challenge from you, (not liking sexual stuff between minors) into consideration, so no sex or arousal stated in this one ^_^ I actually planned on having peeing in the fic, but for some reason it didn\'t make it into the fic. >.<
Date: Oct 24, 2007 09:01 pm [Report This]
Title: Aelita: Converting Yumi Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Cool, nice to see another CL fic. Didn't notice the challenge (guess I looked it over while checking the others out). The pooping scenes were nice, though I think it could've been a tad longer, but still great nonetheless.

 

Now for the nitpicking! (People gasps and leap from windows):

*You do know that Aelita is a student at Kadic, right? She's enrolled right when season 2 starts and remains so from there on. So she has a dorm at the school.

*Yumi is a 'day-student'; she attends classes at the Acedemy, but still lives at her own house. She has no dorm in the school at all.

*SPOILER: *Don't read if you wish to watch the first 2 seasons*

Aelita is a human, just like the others. Franz Hopper, her father, virtualized themselves 10 years before the series started, where they were attacked by XANA. It (XANA) imprisoned Franz somewhere in the super computer and stole Aelita's human memories, thus linking her to the Super Computer (Which is why she would die if the machine were deactivated before severing that link). Throughout season 1 and early half of 2, she and the group are under the belief she's an advanced A.I program, but after her arrival on earth, she has weird dreams and visions. Soon she is found to be human and the gang attempts to retrieve her memories to fully restore her, but XANA kills her after stealing the rest of her memories (which contain the data needed for It to escape the Super Computer.) But her father who has resurfaced resurrects her by seemingly sacrificing himself and restoring her memories and completely making her human again.

 

I think my geek-out destroyed a planet or two :P (The Jedis are gonna be pissed, or at least upset...)



Author's Response: Thanks for reading, I was pretty sure Aelita had her own room at the dorm, but I didn\'t know about Yumi >_< I haven\'t really watched much of the series
Date: Oct 23, 2007 10:05 pm [Report This]
Title: Aelita Reviewer: Anime Lover Signed

thanks for the suggestion for a new title, but once I complete a fic, I don't change the name.

 

Thanks for reading though ^_^ 

Date: Sep 10, 2007 04:25 pm [Report This]
Title: Aelita Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Very nice, and certainly a good continuation of my story.

I actually thought of a better name for this, Aelita's secret, you can use it if you want.

Date: Sep 10, 2007 12:15 am [Report This]
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