For once, Toph got her ass handed to her by Katara utterly in your fics. Nice change of pattern.
Though I'm smelling a sequel to this story......
Still great though. ^_^
Only thing that would have made it any better for me is more on the accident at the end, but I'm an accident guy.
Good work!
Very nice, always nice to see another Avatar story. I gotta try my hand at one eventually. I can see this probably becoming a long series (if you pay careful attention to the time between entries and the remaining time you mentioned in between the episodes).
I will point out there are the usual spelling errors, but nothing really serious. I certainly think you did pretty well in having Toph remain fairly strong in her attempt to not mess. Though I wonder if she'd be all that bothered with poopy pants once it's all over, she does seem to have a penchant for being dirty.
I wish the actual accident had gotten a little more attention, but the desperation was excellent.
As always, thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it ^_^
I admit, Toph actual loss could've had more attention though