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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
Very good. I wonder if I've read the original? I should hunt it down and find out.

I actually think I liked the squirming and trying to hold in the cum more than I enjoyed the squirting.

Overall, good work. I enjoyed reading it.
Date: Jan 27, 2009 08:55 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Nia Signed
Nice story,
Date: Jan 10, 2009 11:12 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed
Nice story. I think I read the original a while back, but I can't recall. Still it's pretty good. I'm not much for the loli sex thing, but it's alright. Glad to see you haven't totally left the site ;)
Date: Jan 10, 2009 09:08 pm [Report This]
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