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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: bulmafan97 Signed
Very nice. I found it very realistic that she didn't even notice she was urinating until it was way too late. Why can't more girls in media react this way to terror?
Date: Nov 27, 2009 10:50 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: MMTwo Signed
Good stuff. Though I'm more of a fan of accidents that focus on the feelings inside, compared to this story's focus on what the accident does to her clothing. Oh well.
Date: Aug 10, 2009 02:35 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
You do a great job of making Rikku's fear palpable, and of describing an uncleanable mess. Even in accident fics, the mess rarely seems so overwhelming. Kudos! The peeing was a nice bonus, too. ^_^

Incidentally, in your other "Final Fantasy" fic you wrote, "at least she didn't have diarrhea like Rikku on the Moonflow." When I read that, I thought "Moonflow" was a fancy word for "menstrual period." Now I see it's an awkwardly-named river. -_-
Date: Aug 08, 2009 04:35 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed
Ah, Rikku messing herself. It never gets old. Glad to see this one back as well.

Author's Response: Of course not. Who doesn't love seeing a cute, bubbly blond with a massive, stinky load sagging in the seat of her pants? Thanks for the review.
Date: Aug 06, 2009 01:55 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Anime Lover Signed

nice, short pooping fic ^_^

doesn't hurt that Rikku is one of my fav FF girls 



Author's Response: It was intended to be nothing else :). I remember wanting to do a "fear messing" and thinking rikku seemed like a good victim. I've made it very clear that if I could find a way to, I'd fuck the pixels that make up Yuna, but it terms of physical appearance Rikku ranks pretty high on my list as well :P. Thanks for the review!
Date: Aug 06, 2009 12:01 am [Report This]
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