PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL! ITS FUNNY!

great story

I like your description of Raven's bodily control, and how diarrhea defeats that. It's a good setup. I avoided looking at the tags, so I didn't know if she would do all her explosions into a toilet or not make it in time, and you kept me in suspense until the last minute. I'd say the high point of this 3-chapter tale is Raven's diarrhea accident, which you portray vividly. I can't remember the last time a diarrhea accident was so well-described. The description of her walking with her pantload is also a highlight. There are quite a few typos. Your misspelling of "meager" actually confused me the first time, because I thought a "megear flame" was some psionic thing. I was also confused by this sentence: "But it wasn't her body, or rather her physical appearance, that dragged her from her slumber." Huh?

I wasn't expecting a Starfire scene to follow, but the surprise was a pleasant one. Not as entertaining as the Raven one, but I like how her movement is solid and hard to pass in contrast to Raven's, and the mental image of her in her PJs is one I enjoy (I've seen her in some old comics but never in the "Teen Titans" cartoon). The stuff about her ritual is neat. I don't understand why she goes in her clothes, though. You don't mention that being part of the ritual.

My only major complaint with this whole fic is that it's an extraordinary coincidence that Raven has diarrhea the same night Starfire finishes her ritual. If you revise this fic, I'd suggest you break it into two separate fics. In other words, have Raven mess herself one night and be discovered by a non-messy Starfire, and have Starfire mess herself another night (or day) and bump into a non-messy Raven. Longer scenes of the girls' interaction (and humiliation) would help both parts, I think.

All in all, a good story (or stories). When did you write this? Someone somewhere referred to it as old, but your writing style seems well-developed.