Another pretty good story. I'd like to see what happens at McDonald's. I'd like to see how John would react if Delilah overestimated her ability to hold it all in :).
Author's Response: Thanks again man you can check out more of Delilah and John on my Deviantart account: Syncej
Reviews For Fartastic Tales Of Delilah and the family
Date: Jun 25, 2014 08:43 pm [Report This]
This was... really not too bad. The characters were believable. They felt pretty real. I felt like a fly on the wall in a private moment of their lives :).
The ultimate release was really nicely done, too. The onomatopoeias were pretty good ^^.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
The ultimate release was really nicely done, too. The onomatopoeias were pretty good ^^.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: Jun 25, 2014 08:08 pm [Report This]
Nice I hope we get to see what happens after the McDonalds trip
Author's Response: Thank! but sorry my man It was just a short story not releasing a part 2 or anything. Although you can check out more of theses type of stories on my Deviantart account: Syncej
Author's Response: Thank! but sorry my man It was just a short story not releasing a part 2 or anything. Although you can check out more of theses type of stories on my Deviantart account: Syncej
Date: Jun 17, 2014 03:05 am [Report This]
Not too bad, could use some extension, it's a little short. However, I give you a five star rating for your work. Keep it up, bro. You're doing good.
Author's Response: Its a short story so I don't mind I write on deviant so its cool. Thanks man
Author's Response: Its a short story so I don't mind I write on deviant so its cool. Thanks man
Date: Jun 15, 2014 06:25 pm [Report This]
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