Reviews For Re-Education Through Toilet
This is incredible! The wording is so beautiful that I can't (no pun intended) explain it in words. Your skill in writing is simply unbelieveable! All i wish is for the next chapter.
Date: Dec 03, 2012 03:06 pm [Report This]
Really good voyeur story, great detail and its nice that you lingered instead of rushing the poop scenes. Your vocabulary is par excellence but I've gotta say that for this kinda stuff it's a little too high brow, it's hard for something to be sexy when the big words are either slowing or confusing the reader. Overall a great story!
Author's Response: I like to mix things up a little, instead of "brown log" after "brown log". Of course, as you mentioned, this has its disadvantages too. Thanks for the constructive criticism, and I'll certainly take note.
Author's Response: I like to mix things up a little, instead of "brown log" after "brown log". Of course, as you mentioned, this has its disadvantages too. Thanks for the constructive criticism, and I'll certainly take note.
Date: Nov 29, 2012 10:54 pm [Report This]
Whoops. Mispelled Zee_Phyro's name. I didn't mean to do that.
Date: Nov 29, 2012 06:01 pm [Report This]
Great story, dude! Just asking, but, where did you pick up your writing skills? You possibly write better than me. Anyway, with that aside, this is an awesome story, and I saw your reply to Zee_Pyro about how you were going to make this a series on the site. As a matter of fact, when you get the chance, could you pick up where this one left off? Also, I'm gonna' need some advice on how to write the perfect series, because I'm gonna' respond to Ultima02's Apocalypse Saga challenge, and I don't know where to start on how to make it awesome. Any advice will be appreciated. Anyway, this thing deserves five stars. How do you access that option?
Author's Response: I AM going to continue this, "Completed: No" is there for a reason. As for the writing, I just imagined myself as Jimmy Hopkins and went from there.
Author's Response: I AM going to continue this, "Completed: No" is there for a reason. As for the writing, I just imagined myself as Jimmy Hopkins and went from there.
Date: Nov 29, 2012 06:00 pm [Report This]
Great story. A nice voyeur tale.
I would say the beginning part felt a bit rushed, and could have used more dialogue to help pace it out (like Jimmy convincing the jock, and maybe some more stuff with Beatrice). Overall, a good start to possibly something great.
Author's Response: Yes, I agree that the beginning was not the best, with my enjoyment increasing only in the later parts. I also concur that exposition was slightly lacking in this one. And of course there will be more of Beatrice, most likely as a side project. I'm elated to receive such a warm response to the story, I will do my best to maintain this quality of writing.
Date: Nov 29, 2012 02:54 am [Report This]
Brilliant! Guess I'll go and get my copy of Bully :p alwayls love voyeurism scenes, plus both girls are constipated. This one really makes my day.
Author's Response: Yes, get your copy of Bully NOW! This was a story I legitimately enjoyed writing and am glad this is reflected in the reviews. I'm going to make Bully a series on this site!
Author's Response: Yes, get your copy of Bully NOW! This was a story I legitimately enjoyed writing and am glad this is reflected in the reviews. I'm going to make Bully a series on this site!
Date: Nov 29, 2012 01:56 am [Report This]