A very good story!
Best one I've read in a while.
Just what I'd been waiting for so long.
It had the right atmosphere for a Silent Hill story, and the way you described the surroundings really felt like something you'd see in Silent Hill, or any good survival horror game.
Not to mention some pretty detailed and...interesting details of Heather's bowel movements.
Great stuff! Thanks for writing it!
Here's a picture that I believe goes well with this story:
http://myroski.deviantart.com/art/Silent-Hill-quot-Caught-quot-Entry-91059810
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. Personally, I prefer the one picture I posted in the media section, looks a bit more faithful to the feel of things.