I'm glad you're happy with the changes and additions, my plan was to edit this chapter, but I didn't want to change this one without the first.

and in this story, Garnet isn't really an anal virgin, she's just very 'reserved' when it comes to sex around other people, especially those like Yuna and Rikku, so open and eager about it, except Zidane.

I was a little concerned about including a yuri scene in a 'fetish' fic, cause, people would read this for the pooping, not really the sex. Not to mention you wanted a scat fic, not a sex one. In my initial version of the fic, particularly, chapter two, I tried to make Yuna and Garnet's orgasms purposly less descriptive than I usually do, so it wouldn't be too distracting from the main theme of the fic.

Clearly, though, for the edit, I made the orgasms a little more descriptive and I actually included a sex scene.

Actually, I wanted to include a small masturbation scene with Garnet at the end of the first chapter, but I reluctantly decided against it.

Yeah, the pooping could've been longer, but I was worried that with five different pooping scenes, they would all start to seem the same and the last thing I want is someone reading to feel like they read the same thing before.

But I amy happy that each pooping scene was about a page in length, so that's roughly five pages of pooping over fifteen pages, which I think is pretty good.

I actually read the fic with Yuna coming from her pooping after I did Yuna's scene, but I liked the unintintional refrence, since YRP's pooping contest in this series is largly based on you and poowrites fics, like you said before, it's a 'non-canon'.

Although, I did particularly like doing Yuna and Garnet's scenes, it was a nice change from the usual just pooping. I liked Garnet's even more so, with her realising she was getting sexual gratification from her pooping, yet dreading it as well and ultimatly climaxing powerfully and feeling humiliated.

I couldn't reamimber though if Garnet liked Zidane, there was one line I had for Garnet about Zidane, but couldn't remimber what their relationship was.

I actually thought the beginning was a bit too dark for the kind of 'fun' fic this was, but I wanted to show that the problem they faced was a serious threat.

and I thought about having Rikku speak in Al-bhed, but I just decided against it, there wasn't really anything that Rikku wanted to tell Yuna privately in this fic, like she did with the first one.