Very nicely done. It's been a while since you did something, so it's great to see another work from you. I was kind of expecting the ending to maybe tie into my mention of her from the Jill story, though her lack of serious outburst at her accident still kind of fits.

I liked how the dream almost could work for an allegory of her desperation, the ache coming and going being the growing fear. Along with a lignering memory of the horrors that probably almost had her messing herself in the games proper.