Quick and to the point, which is nice. But it does need work. It feels like it could use more build-up and tension as the desperation comes into play, maybe with some near accidents during a few fights. Also, it would help to give the description of Aurora a bit earlier, or at least fix it so there's more detail about her body and the suit she's in so it's not just a brief quip about her looks. 

Given the unhealthy nature of all of that old and irradiated food one wound find in the wasteland, I imagine that there could be quite a lot of diarrhea involved in this series, possibly even vomit as well. Fortunately I'm a huge fan of both, lol.

I look forward to reading more here! Its a good start!