Not bad, again I think the best part of the story is probably the dialog and the interactions between the characters. It was a little light on the sex, and it ended before things got to hot and heavy, but what was there was by no means bad.

There were a few times you slipped into past tense, but not many.

Overall, good story. The sex could have been a bit longer but I gotta say I was overall pretty happy with it.

Not bad. Too bad for Kim, how is the savior of the universe supposed to fight crime with pee-stained panties. None of the villians will take her seriously :)